Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，同时避免重复和不完整的句子。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, as a postgraduate student, I often need to remember a lot of professional knowledge, which has helped me improve my memory skills.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态和单复数形式，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, sometimes I forget important things when I am very busy. However, I usually make a schedule to remind myself of my tasks, so I rarely forget important matters.

提案: 回答结构不够完整，句子断裂。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体原因或例子支持，注意句子连贯和语法正确。

例: The most important thing I need to remember daily is to eat on time. Since I have many tasks every day, I often forget meals, which affects my health.

提案: 回答中断句不当，语法错误较多。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达方法，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: At the start of each day, I usually make a timetable or schedule to organise my tasks. This helps me remember what I need to do and manage my time effectively.

× We will require a read to memorize many professional knowledge.

✓ We are required to read and memorize much professional knowledge.

这里的 'knowledge' 是不可数名词，不能用复数形式 'knowledges'，且 'require a read' 表达不正确，应改为被动语态 'are required to read'。建议使用不可数名词 'much knowledge'。

× During my high school life, so I'm good at memory something.

✓ During my high school life, I was good at memorizing things.

'good at memory something' 结构错误，正确表达应为 'good at memorizing something'，即动名词形式。且句中 'so' 用法不当，应去掉。

× Maybe in sometimes.

✓ Maybe sometimes.

'in sometimes' 是错误搭配，'sometimes' 本身表示频率副词，不需要介词 'in'。

× maybe I will forgot to do something.

✓ maybe I will forget to do something.

'forgot' 是过去式，'will' 后应接动词原形，故应为 'forget'。

× But always I've already a time schedule and told me what should I do so I will not too. Forget it.

✓ But I always already have a time schedule that tells me what I should do, so I will not forget it.

句子结构混乱，'I've already a time schedule' 应为 'I already have a time schedule'，'told me' 应为 'that tells me'，'so I will not too. Forget it.' 断句错误，应连成一句。

× Eat at time because I have too many things to do everyday so I usually forgot to eat at time.

✓ Eat on time because I have too many things to do every day, so I usually forget to eat on time.

'eat at time' 应为 'eat on time'，'everyday' 作为形容词用法不当，应分开为副词 'every day'，'forgot' 应为一般现在时 'forget' 以符合语境。

× Eat at time because I have too many things to do everyday so I usually forgot to eat at time.

✓ Eat on time because I have too many things to do every day, so I usually forget to eat on time.

介词 'at' 用于时间点，'on time' 表示准时，故应使用 'on time'。

× I usually to make a timetable or schedule before I'm start to do.

✓ I usually make a timetable or schedule before I start to do anything.

'usually to make' 结构错误，'usually' 后直接接动词原形，且 'I'm start to do' 应为 'I start to do'。

× Order saying what I should do during this day.

✓ Ordering what I should do during the day.

'Order saying' 词序和表达不当，应改为动名词 'Ordering'，且 'during this day' 更自然表达为 'during the day'。