Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I prefer analyzing and solving problems. For example, I find it hard to remember chemistry formulas.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够流畅，有语法和用词错误。建议注意句子完整性和连贯性，使用适当的连接词。

例: Yes, last week I forgot my best friend's birthday, which made her feel disappointed. When I realized my mistake, it was already late, so I bought an expensive gift to make up for it.

提案: 回答较为清晰，内容具体，但句子结构可以更自然，连接词使用不足。建议增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I need to remember all the deadlines because it's difficult for me to keep track of dates. For instance, last month I missed a meeting because I forgot the guidelines. Therefore, I realize I need to pay more attention to my schedule.

提案: 回答中有语音停顿和表达不清，句子不完整。建议练习流利表达，避免口头语，使用完整句子。

例: I usually use an app to remember important things because I am really into technology. This app sends me reminders to ensure I don't forget anything important.

× Now the reality because I'm good at analyzing and solving problem then my memories in something that is that is why.

✓ Now the reality is because I'm good at analyzing and solving problems, then my memory is something like that, that is why.

这里的 'problem' 应该用复数形式 'problems'，因为表示多个问题。同时 'memories' 应改为单数 'memory'，表示记忆力。

× Chemistry is not my thing.

✓ Chemistry is not my thing.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I can't remember all the formulas about the chemistry.

✓ I can't remember all the formulas about chemistry.

'the chemistry' 中的定冠词 'the' 不需要，'chemistry' 作为学科名词通常不加冠词。

× Yes last week I forgot my best friends birthday which made her feel.

✓ Yes, last week I forgot my best friend's birthday which made her feel disappointed.

'best friends birthday' 应为 'best friend's birthday'，表示单数所有格。句子缺少 'disappointed' 形容词来完整表达意思。

× Crowd disappointed when I realized my this mistake.

✓ She was disappointed when I realized this mistake.

原句结构混乱，'Crowd disappointed' 不合适，应改为 'She was disappointed'，并且 'my this mistake' 应为 'this mistake'。

× It was so late so I bought a expensive gift for her birthday.

✓ It was so late, so I bought an expensive gift for her birthday.

'a expensive' 应改为 'an expensive'，因为 'expensive' 以元音音素开头，冠词应使用 'an'。

× I need to remember all the deadlines because it's difficult for me to remember some dates.

✓ I need to remember all the deadlines because it's difficult for me to remember some dates.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× Last month I missed a meeting because I forgot the guidelines.

✓ Last month I missed a meeting because I forgot the guidelines.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I realize I need to pay more attention to my schedule.

✓ I realize I need to pay more attention to my schedule.

此句无语法错误，保持原句。

× I usually use an app to remember important things because of, UM, really into technology.

✓ I usually use an app to remember important things because I'm really into technology.

'because of, UM, really into technology' 结构不完整，应改为 'because I'm really into technology'，使用正确的动词形式。

× This app can help can stand me? Reminders to ensure I don't forget the important things.

✓ This app can help remind me by sending reminders to ensure I don't forget important things.

原句结构混乱，'can help can stand me?' 不合适，应改为 'can help remind me'，并补充完整句意。