Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

例: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget details quickly, just like the saying about goldfish having a short memory.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的表达，增加细节描述，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, once I forgot my mother's birthday, which made her very upset. I apologized and tried to make it up to her, and eventually, we reconciled.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用连接词，丰富词汇，表达更流畅。

例: I need to remember basic tasks every day. Therefore, I usually set reminders on my phone to help me keep track of important things I have to do.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，句子不连贯。建议简化表达，使用正确的语法和连接词，明确说明方法。

例: I use a planner or my phone to write down tasks and goals. This way, I can check them off and avoid forgetting important things.

× I always said myself is of.

✓ I always say to myself.

这里'said myself is of'的表达不正确，应该用'say to myself'表示对自己说话。'said'是过去式，不符合语境，且缺少介词'to'。

× Goldfish memory Kisco fish only have 7 seconds of memories.

✓ Goldfish have only 7 seconds of memory.

句子结构混乱，'Goldfish memory Kisco fish'不通顺，应简化为'Goldfish have only 7 seconds of memory'。

× And I can describe myself like that, 'cause I'm really not a good memorizing things.

✓ And I can describe myself like that, 'cause I'm really not good at memorizing things.

'not a good memorizing things'结构错误，应该用'not good at memorizing things'，且'memorizing'后不加复数名词。

× Yeah, of course I forgot things easily.

✓ Yeah, of course I forget things easily.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'forget'，而不是过去时'forgot'。

× she was really angry to me.

✓ she was really angry with me.

'angry'后面搭配介词应为'with'，表示对某人生气。

× And I try to serve her mood for a long while and finally we are good.

✓ And I tried to improve her mood for a long while and finally we were good.

描述过去的动作，动词应使用过去式'tried'和'were'，且'serve her mood'表达不当，应为'improve her mood'。

× Like what I have to do and this day I will make a small reminder in my cellphone to avoid forgetting the important things that I need to do today.

✓ Like what I have to do, and on this day I will make a small reminder on my cellphone to avoid forgetting the important things that I need to do today.

'in my cellphone'应改为'on my cellphone'，表示在手机上设置提醒。

× I tried to make a small planner and a book or in my cell phone.

✓ I try to make a small planner and use a book or my cell phone.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时'try'，且句子结构不完整，需补充动词。

× 2. Drop down some small task for me to finish or some goals for me too.

✓ I write down some small tasks for me to finish or some goals for me to achieve.

'Drop down'用法不当，应为'write down'，且'task'应为复数'tasks'，句子结构需完整。

× Achieve so that I won't we forgot them.

✓ so that I won't forget them.

句子中'won't we forgot'结构错误，应为'won't forget'，去掉多余的'we'，且'forgot'应为原形动词'forget'。