Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to make your answers clearer and more natural by avoiding grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, instead of saying 'An disability has always been beneficial,' you can say 'This technique has always been helpful.' Also, use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing things because I use special techniques like repetition. For example, when studying for exams, I read the material several times, which helps me understand the information more effectively.

提案: In English (Cambodia), focus on correct grammar and clearer sentence structure. For example, instead of 'This always happen because I was struggling too much on many tasks an I did manage my time properly,' say 'This happened because I was struggling with many tasks and did not manage my time properly.' Also, use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as missing a deadline for a school project. This happened because I was struggling with many tasks and did not manage my time properly. Therefore, I have learned to use reminders and plan ahead to avoid similar situations.

提案: In English (Cambodia), try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, 'magnetic our time affectively' is unclear; instead, say 'manage my time effectively.' Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'Anna, why forgetting important responsibility.' Use linking words such as 'also' or 'in addition' to connect ideas.

例: In my daily life, it is important to stay organized and manage my time effectively. For example, keeping a to-do list helps me prioritize tasks and avoid forgetting important responsibilities. Also, maintaining a healthy lifestyle by eating a balanced diet and getting enough sleep is crucial for my well-being.

提案: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear and correct sentence structure. For example, instead of 'I think this might not help me stay organized,' say 'I think this helps me stay organized.' Also, use linking words like 'then' and 'also' correctly to make your answer coherent.

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down on paper or using electronic devices like my phone. Then, I set reminders so I don't forget deadlines or appointments. Also, I try to complete tasks regularly to avoid forgetting them.

× For example, when I'm studying for exam use special techniques like repetition an trying to read again and again which helped me to understand the information more effectively.

✓ For example, when I'm studying for an exam, I use special techniques like repetition and try to read again and again, which helps me to understand the information more effectively.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'trying' instead of 'try' after 'like repetition and'. After 'like', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to agree with the present tense context. Additionally, 'exam' needs an article 'an'.

× An disability has always been beneficial.

✓ A disability has never been beneficial.

The sentence uses 'An' incorrectly before a consonant sound and the meaning is unclear. Likely, the student meant to say 'A disability has never been beneficial.' Also, 'An' should be 'A' before 'disability' because 'disability' starts with a consonant sound.

× This always happen because I was struggling too much on many tasks an I did manage my time properly.

✓ This always happens because I was struggling too much with many tasks and I did not manage my time properly.

The verb 'happen' should be in the third person singular present tense 'happens' to agree with the subject 'This'. Also, 'on' should be 'with' when talking about struggling with tasks. 'An' should be 'and'. 'Did manage' should be 'did not manage' to express the negative meaning.

× Scindens I have learned to use reminder and plan ahead to avoid similar situation in my phone.

✓ Since then, I have learned to use reminders and plan ahead to avoid similar situations by using my phone.

'Scindens' is a misspelling of 'Since then'. 'Reminder' should be plural 'reminders'. 'Situation' should be plural 'situations'. 'In my phone' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'by using my phone' or 'on my phone'.

× In my daily life, it is important to remember to stay organized an magnetic our time affectively.

✓ In my daily life, it is important to remember to stay organized and manage our time effectively.

'An' should be 'and'. 'Magnetic' is incorrect; the correct word is 'manage'. 'Affectively' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'effectively'.

× For example, keep doing unless help me to prioritize tasks.

✓ For example, keeping a to-do list helps me to prioritize tasks.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Keep doing unless' does not make sense. A clearer sentence is 'keeping a to-do list helps me to prioritize tasks.'

× Anna, why forgetting important responsibility.

✓ Also, I avoid forgetting important responsibilities.

'Anna' is likely a misspelling of 'Also'. 'Why forgetting' is incorrect; it should be 'I avoid forgetting'. 'Responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' to match the context.

× Additionally, considering about healthy lifestyle by eating owner by lens diet and getting enough sleep is crucial for over.

✓ Additionally, considering a healthy lifestyle by eating an organic balanced diet and getting enough sleep is crucial overall.

'Considering about' is incorrect; it should be 'considering'. 'Owner by lens diet' is unclear and likely a misspelling of 'organic balanced diet'. 'For over' is incorrect; the correct word is 'overall'.

× I usually remember important things by writing them down in the paper or using electronic devices like phone.

✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down on paper or using electronic devices like my phone.

'In the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Like phone' should be 'like my phone' to specify possession.

× I think this might not help me stay organized.

✓ I think this might help me stay organized.

The original sentence contradicts the intended meaning. Writing things down and using devices usually helps stay organized, so 'might not help' should be 'might help'.

× Than I can actually set the reminder so I don't forget that line or appointment.

✓ Then I can actually set a reminder so I don't forget the time or appointment.

'Than' should be 'Then' to indicate sequence. 'The reminder' should be 'a reminder' as it is not specific. 'That line' is unclear; likely meant 'the time'.

× Additionally I can complete it regularly an never forget it again.

✓ Additionally, I can complete it regularly and never forget it again.

'An' should be 'and' to connect the two clauses properly.