Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和表达不够准确，且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和单复数的正确使用。

例: Actually, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget important details, so I keep reminders on my phone to help me.

提案: 回答内容较为混乱，句子结构不清晰，时态使用不当。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，合理使用连接词，使叙述更连贯。

例: Yes, I once forgot an important final exam. It was held online at 8 AM during the pandemic, but I overslept and missed it. When I woke up and checked my phone, it was already too late.

提案: 回答表达不清，句子不完整且逻辑混乱。建议先明确主题句，然后用简洁的句子详细说明，避免语法错误。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the tasks I have to complete each day and the study plans I make. If I forget these, I might miss important deadlines or opportunities.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用连贯的句子，正确使用时态和单复数，并清楚表达方法。

例: I usually use my phone to remember important things because they often have many details. I set multiple alarms to remind me so I don't forget when I'm busy.

× I'm not good at memory and memorizing things, and I often forgot things that I have to keep those things in my phone under in order to remind me.

✓ I'm not good at memorizing things, and I often forget things, so I have to keep them in my phone to remind me.

这里“memory”用法不当，应该用动名词“memorizing things”表示记忆的动作；“forgot”时态错误，应为一般现在时“forget”，因为描述的是习惯性动作；“those things”重复且冗余，改为“them”更简洁。

× I often forgot things that I have to keep those things in my phone under in order to remind me.

✓ I often forget things, so I have to keep them in my phone to remind me.

“forgot”是过去式，但句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”。

× Of course it was on final exam on one semester.

✓ Of course, it was during the final exam of one semester.

“on final exam”搭配错误，应使用介词“during”表示在考试期间；“on one semester”应改为“of one semester”表示所属关系。

× Only tested online because of the pandemic by the time and it was in the 9:00 AM or 8 AM, 8:00 AM in the morning but I was at home by the time and I slept over and I overslept and I forgot all about it.

✓ It was only tested online because of the pandemic at that time, and it was at 8:00 or 9:00 AM in the morning, but I was at home then and I overslept and forgot all about it.

“by the time”用法错误，应改为“at that time”或“then”；时间点前应使用介词“at”；“slept over”用法错误，应为“overslept”表示睡过头。

× By the time I woke up, I look at my phone I realized it too late.

✓ By the time I woke up and looked at my phone, I realized it was too late.

“look”应为过去式“looked”，与前后时态保持一致；缺少连词“and”使句子更通顺；“it too late”缺少动词“was”。

× I guess the most important things I have to remember interview life is the.

✓ I guess the most important things I have to remember in my daily life are the following.

句子结构不完整，“interview life”应为“daily life”；缺少谓语动词“are”；句尾不完整。

× Work I have to do within a day and the plans I have made for the study every day in those carrying important what you have to do and if you don't remember right thing yet you could do something in miss.

✓ The work I have to do within a day and the plans I have made for studying every day are important things you have to do, and if you don't remember the right things, you might miss something.

“for the study”应为“for studying”；“in those carrying important”语序和用词错误，改为“are important things”；“do something in miss”表达错误，应为“miss something”。

× I tend to use my phone to help me remember it because those important things has so many details that I really can't keep up.

✓ I tend to use my phone to help me remember because those important things have so many details that I really can't keep up.

“has”应为“have”，因为“things”是复数；“remember it”中“it”多余，直接用“remember”即可。

× So every time I forgot something all I'm not focusing on my task at the moment.

✓ So every time I forget something, it's because I'm not focusing on my task at the moment.

“forgot”应为一般现在时“forget”，描述习惯性动作；“all I'm not focusing”表达不清，改为“it's because I'm not focusing”更准确。

× I have said many. Alarm clocks to pop up to remind me.

✓ I have set many alarms to pop up to remind me.

“said many”用词错误，应为“set many alarms”；“alarm clocks”通常简化为“alarms”；句子断裂，需合并。