Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“Saints happened”不明确且不合适，且回答中有语气词“Uh”，影响流畅性。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免口语填充词，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I have a good memory. For instance, when I was in high school, I was able to easily memorize and recite poems and texts.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容混乱，影响理解。建议简洁明了地描述事件，注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, once in university, I forgot to attend an important exam for my teaching certificate. The examiner called me, and I had to prepare quickly to handle the situation.

提案: 回答中存在拼写错误和表达不准确的问题，如“re tore”应为“retell”。建议注意拼写和用词准确，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Currently, I am trying to read more, so I need to remember the plot and the names of the characters in the books, so I can retell the stories to my family members.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“write to this things”，“get bad”。建议使用正确的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To remember important things, I write them on sticky notes and put them on my bed. Every time I go to bed, I see the notes and recall the information.

× Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take examination for my teacher certificate boy, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I get a really cook preparation to get the the office.

✓ Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take an examination for my teacher certificate, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I got a really poor preparation to get to the office.

句中描述过去发生的事情，动词时态应使用过去式。'get'应改为过去式'got'，表示过去的动作。

× Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take examination for my teacher certificate boy, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I get a really cook preparation to get the the office.

✓ Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take an examination for my teacher certificate, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I got a really poor preparation to get to the office.

'examination'前缺少冠词'an'，因为这里指的是一次具体的考试。

× Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take examination for my teacher certificate boy, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I get a really cook preparation to get the the office.

✓ Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take an examination for my teacher certificate, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I got a really poor preparation to get to the office.

'cook'应为形容词'poor'，用来描述准备的质量。

× Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take examination for my teacher certificate boy, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I get a really cook preparation to get the the office.

✓ Yes, when I was in university I was supposed to take an examination for my teacher certificate, but I totally forgot and the examiner called me and I got a really poor preparation to get to the office.

'get the the office'中的'get'后应接介词'to'，表示去某地。

× Currently I'm forcing myself to read a lot so I need to remember the plot of the book and the names of the character so I can re tore this content of the book to my family members.

✓ Currently I'm forcing myself to read a lot so I need to remember the plot of the book and the names of the characters so I can retell this content of the book to my family members.

'character'应为复数形式'characters'，因为指多个角色。

× Currently I'm forcing myself to read a lot so I need to remember the plot of the book and the names of the character so I can re tore this content of the book to my family members.

✓ Currently I'm forcing myself to read a lot so I need to remember the plot of the book and the names of the characters so I can retell this content of the book to my family members.

're tore'应为'retell'，表示复述内容。

× In order to remember important things I will write to this things on a sticker and put it on my bed.

✓ In order to remember important things I will write these things on a sticker and put it on my bed.

'write to this things'中'write'后不应加' to '，且'this'应为'these'，表示复数。

× In order to remember important things I will write to this things on a sticker and put it on my bed.

✓ In order to remember important things I will write these things on a sticker and put it on my bed.

'things'是复数，指示代词应使用复数形式'these'。

× And every time when I get bad I can see it and recall it again.

✓ And every time when I get to bed I can see it and recall it again.

'get bad'应为'get to bed'，表示上床睡觉。