Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời câu trả lời không đầy đủ và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ ý.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have a strong long-term memory. For instance, I can easily remember important dates and facts for my studies.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về việc quên điều gì đó quan trọng.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, like safety procedures at work or special occasions such as birthdays. However, I am trying to improve my memory to avoid this.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời thiếu liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule for walks and study sessions. Additionally, I try to set aside time to spend with my family and friends.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích phương pháp bạn sử dụng để ghi nhớ các điều quan trọng.

例: I usually remember important things by making lists and repeating them in my mind several times to ensure I don't forget.

× I can easy play remember the.

✓ I can easily remember things.

The phrase 'easy play remember the' is incorrect. 'Easy' should be the adverb 'easily' to modify the verb 'remember'. 'Play' is unnecessary here. The sentence should be 'I can easily remember things.' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important such as a.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important such as a special day.

The use of 'have ever forgotten' is incorrect. 'Ever' is typically used in questions or negative sentences, not affirmative ones. The sentence should be 'I have forgotten something important such as a special day.' Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed clarification.

× The safety of my work or some special day? But I think I. Can improve that.

✓ The safety of my work or some special day. But I think I can improve that.

The question mark after 'some special day' is incorrect as it is part of the statement. Also, the sentence was fragmented with a period after 'I'. It should be combined properly as 'But I think I can improve that.'

× I think I need to remember uh. The calendar of my walks and study, and sometimes I also remember spending chance for my family and friends.

✓ I think I need to remember the calendar of my work and study, and sometimes I also remember spending time with my family and friends.

'Walks' should be 'work' to make sense in context. 'Spending chance' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spending time'. Also, 'for my family and friends' should be 'with my family and friends' to indicate spending time together.

× I think I can't remember important things up by. Thinking alot UF about. What I want to remember an. Listing.

✓ I think I remember important things by thinking a lot about what I want to remember and listing them.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect prepositions and words. 'Can't remember important things up by' is incorrect; it should be 'remember important things by'. 'Thinking alot UF about' should be 'thinking a lot about'. 'An. Listing.' should be 'and listing them.' The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct.