Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，直接回答问题，并避免重复和无意义的词汇。

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details easily.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确时态，清晰描述事件，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I once forgot to give a gift to my girlfriend on her birthday, which made her very upset.

提案: 回答内容杂乱且语法错误较多，建议条理清晰地列举需要记住的具体事项，并使用连接词。

例: I need to remember important dates like my parents' and girlfriend's birthdays, school schedules, and my daily walking times.

提案: 回答表达不清，词汇使用错误。建议明确说明使用的记忆方法，并用正确的词汇和句子表达。

例: I usually set reminders or alarms on my phone to help me remember important things.

× Well, I don't really good at memorizing things.

✓ Well, I'm not really good at memorizing things.

这里缺少了系动词“am”，导致句子结构不完整。正确表达应该是“I am not really good at...”，表示状态。

× 'Cause I am not good at doing that. Anne. I really.

✓ 'Cause I am not good at doing that, really.

句子中“Anne”无意义且打断了句子流畅，应删除。句尾的“I really”不完整，应去掉或补充完整。

× Actually I have a always forgot some essential things from samples.

✓ Actually, I have always forgotten some essential things from samples.

副词“always”位置错误，应放在助动词“have”之后。动词“forgot”应使用过去分词“forgotten”与现在完成时搭配。

× Actually I have a always forgot some essential things from samples.

✓ Actually, I have always forgotten some essential things from samples.

现在完成时态需要用过去分词形式“forgotten”，而不是一般过去式“forgot”。

× I remember that one time I have to deliver my gifts to my girlfriends but I forgot it especially when it was his birthday.

✓ I remember that one time I had to deliver my gifts to my girlfriend but I forgot, especially when it was her birthday.

“have to”应使用过去式“had to”，因为描述的是过去的事情。girlfriends应为单数girlfriend，且生日的代词应与girlfriend性别一致，使用“her”。

× I remember that one time I have to deliver my gifts to my girlfriends but I forgot it especially when it was his birthday.

✓ I remember that one time I had to deliver my gifts to my girlfriend but I forgot, especially when it was her birthday.

“girlfriends”应为单数“girlfriend”，且生日的代词应与girlfriend性别一致，使用“her”。

× But I forgot to do that and it makes her so angry.

✓ But I forgot to do that and it made her so angry.

前半句是过去时，后半句“makes”应改为过去时“made”，保持时态一致。

× Well a lot of things that I need to remember in my daily life, like the days, the times when I should go to school, that date when my girlfriend my parents birthday is.

✓ Well, a lot of things that I need to remember in my daily life, like the days, the times when I should go to school, the dates of my girlfriend's and my parents' birthdays.

“that date when my girlfriend my parents birthday is”结构混乱，应改为“the dates of my girlfriend's and my parents' birthdays”，正确使用复数和所有格。

× that date when my girlfriend my parents birthday is.

✓ the dates of my girlfriend's and my parents' birthdays.

缺少所有格形式，需加上“girlfriend's”和“parents'”表示所属关系。

× An my walking time shave a lot.

✓ And my walking time has a lot.

“An”应为“And”，“shave”应为“have”或“has”，但句子不完整，可能想表达“my walking time has a lot of something”，需补充完整。

× An my walking time shave a lot. A lot of things.

✓ And my walking time has a lot of things to remember.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，需补充完整表达。

× A lot of things.

✓ A lot of things.

单独使用“a lot of things”作为句子不完整，应与前句合并或补充谓语。

× As far as I'm concerned, I usually do some technique to remember some important things.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, I usually use some techniques to remember some important things.

“do some technique”用法错误，应使用“use some techniques”。

× I usually do some technique to remember some important things.

✓ I usually use some techniques to remember some important things.

“technique”应为复数“techniques”，表示多种方法。

× For example, I will make some nose or make short blade in my electronic mobile forms to remember some important dies and.

✓ For example, I will make some notes or make short labels in my electronic mobile forms to remember some important dates.

“nose”应为“notes”，“blade”应为“labels”，“dies”应为“dates”，词汇错误导致句意不明。