Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ не очень естественный и содержит много повторений и грамматических ошибок. Постарайтесь отвечать более связно, избегая лишних слов и повторов. Используйте простые и понятные предложения, чтобы выразить свои мысли ясно.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I often read many books for my studies. I try to analyze and synthesize the information to remember it better.

提案: Ответ очень непонятен и содержит много ошибок. Постарайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя полные предложения и избегая бессвязных фраз. Также старайтесь использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, last month I forgot my phone at home, which was very inconvenient for me.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не очень логично построен. Старайтесь строить предложения правильно и использовать связующие слова, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и естественным.

例: The most important thing I need to remember in my daily life is punctuality because I like to do everything on time.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре предложений. Постарайтесь использовать правильные формы глаголов и связывать предложения логично с помощью союзов.

例: To remember important things, I first plan in my journal and write them down in my schedule, especially during my busy days.

× I am good at memorizing skill and because of my study I have to read a lot of books and I and tried to analyze and synthesize Sam and and also. I'm rich.

✓ I am good at memorizing skills because of my studies; I have to read a lot of books and try to analyze and synthesize them.

The phrase 'memorizing skill' should be pluralized to 'memorizing skills' to indicate ability in general (Grammar problem type ID: 1). The verb 'tried' should be in present tense 'try' to match the ongoing action (Grammar problem type ID: 6). Also, 'Sam' seems to be a typo for 'them'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes it was happen it last month I4 and I remember that I forgot my phone very is and. I I'm. And I didn't.

✓ Yes, it happened last month and I remember that I forgot my phone.

The verb 'was happen' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'happened' (Grammar problem type ID: 5). The sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words; it is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× The first seeing need to remember in my daily life is. Punctuality and because I'm a punctual person and I to do everything on time and I everything remember.

✓ The first thing I need to remember in my daily life is punctuality because I am a punctual person and I try to do everything on time and remember everything.

'Seeing' should be 'thing' to make sense. The pronoun usage is incorrect and incomplete; 'I to do' should be 'I try to do' for correct verb usage (Grammar problem type ID: 12). The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If I remember important things, firstly I have to planning my journal and also. I tried to write down on my schedule and through throughout my busy schedule.

✓ To remember important things, I first have to plan my journal. I also try to write them down in my schedule throughout my busy day.

'Have to planning' is incorrect; it should be 'have to plan' (Grammar problem type ID: 4). 'Tried' is past tense but the context suggests present habitual action, so 'try' is appropriate (Grammar problem type ID: 6). Prepositions are corrected ('write down on' to 'write down in'). The sentence is rephrased for clarity.