Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более развернутым и структурированным. Постарайтесь использовать связующие слова и объяснить, почему вы хорошо запоминаете интересные вещи.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially if they are interesting to me. For example, I can easily remember stories or facts that catch my attention.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Нужно говорить полными предложениями, использовать правильную грамматику и давать конкретный пример.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot my friend's birthday, which made me feel very bad.

提案: Ответ нечеткий и содержит непонятные слова. Следует отвечать ясно, использовать связующие слова и объяснять, что именно нужно помнить и почему.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to study regularly because sometimes I forget and then I have to catch up later.

提案: Ответ не имеет смысла и не отвечает на вопрос. Нужно использовать простые и понятные предложения, объясняя методы запоминания.

例: I usually write important things down in a notebook or set reminders on my phone to help me remember them.

× Yes, for example I forgotten. Up. Birthday, UM. It is C.

✓ Yes, for example, I have forgotten my birthday.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb, making it grammatically incorrect. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear; it should be a complete sentence to convey the meaning properly.

× Yes, for example I forgotten. Up. Birthday, UM. It is C.

✓ Yes, for example, I have forgotten my birthday.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. It contains incomplete phrases and unclear references. A complete and clear sentence is necessary for effective communication.

× In daily life, it's important to remember to study BIC. BIC 'cause I forgot and study. Usually.

✓ In daily life, it's important to remember to study because I usually forget.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'BIC' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'because'. The sentence should be restructured to clearly express the idea that the student needs to remember to study because they usually forget.

× I don't know, medical summer.

✓ I don't know, maybe summer.

The phrase 'medical summer' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or error. The intended phrase might be 'maybe summer'. The sentence should be corrected to make sense in context.