Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and making the response more concise. Avoid redundancy such as 'has been always useful' and use correct prepositions like 'especially' instead of 'specially'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and article usage, e.g., 'preparing a presentation'.

例: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things. For example, when studying for exams, I use techniques like repetition and making associations, which help me retain information more effectively. This skill has always been useful, especially when learning new languages or preparing a presentation.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical and coherence issues. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'CR my admit card' and 'get my head my car'. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant.

例: Yes, I once forgot my admit card on the day of my grade 12 exam. While heading to the exam centre, I realised it was missing, so I quickly returned home to get it. Fortunately, I live nearby, so I managed to reach the centre on time.

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but can be improved by correcting minor grammatical errors and improving sentence flow. For example, use 'exhausted by' instead of 'exhausted of', and 'overcome challenges' instead of 'overcome challenge'. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'that about'.

例: One important thing I need to remember daily is to stay positive even when things get difficult. Sometimes, I feel very tired and exhausted by my busy work schedule and other commitments. However, I try to take short breaks and remind myself that maintaining a positive attitude helps me overcome challenges.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains unclear phrases like 'recognize my Toscan remember' which affect clarity. Try to use clear and correct expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid minor grammatical errors such as subject-verb agreement.

例: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using digital apps on my phone. This helps me keep track of my tasks and ensures I don't forget deadlines. Additionally, I find that repeating information aloud and associating it with similar concepts makes it easier to recall later.

× This ability has been always useful, specially when learning new languages or preparing presentation.

✓ This ability has always been useful, especially when learning new languages or preparing presentations.

The phrase 'has been always' is incorrect; the adverb 'always' should come before the main verb 'been'. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' to convey the intended meaning. Additionally, 'preparing presentation' lacks an article and plural form; it should be 'preparing presentations' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes I have for back when I was in my grade 12 and I was heading towards my exam centre and suddenly I was checking through my stuff and CR my admit card was missing so I ran back to my house.

✓ Yes, I have. Back when I was in grade 12, I was heading towards my exam centre and suddenly, while checking through my stuff, I realized my admit card was missing, so I ran back to my house.

The original sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Yes I have for back' is incorrect; it should be 'Yes, I have.' The phrase 'CR my admit card was missing' is unclear and likely a typo; it is corrected to 'I realized my admit card was missing.' Commas are added for clarity and proper sentence flow.

× It took me like I was living near to my house that's why I just came back and get my head my car and get into the Center for Max.

✓ It took me little time since I was living near my house; that's why I just came back, got my car, and went to the exam centre.

The phrase 'living near to my house' should be 'living near my house' as 'near' does not require 'to'. 'Get my head my car' is incorrect and unclear; corrected to 'got my car'. 'Get into the Center for Max' is corrected to 'went to the exam centre' for clarity and correctness.

× Sometimes I feel very tired and exhausted of my busy work schedule and other commitments I have.

✓ Sometimes I feel very tired and exhausted from my busy work schedule and other commitments I have.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to express cause of tiredness is 'from'.

× However, I try to take a short break and remind myself that about maintaining a positive attitude that can help me overcome challenge.

✓ However, I try to take a short break and remind myself about maintaining a positive attitude that can help me overcome challenges.

The phrase 'remind myself that about' is incorrect; it should be 'remind myself about'. Also, 'challenge' should be plural 'challenges' to match the context.

× This matter helps me recognize my Toscan remember, ensuring I don't forget the deadlines, and additionally, I find that repeating information aloud and associating it with similar concepts make it easier to recall later.

✓ This method helps me recognize my tasks to remember, ensuring I don't forget the deadlines, and additionally, I find that repeating information aloud and associating it with similar concepts makes it easier to recall later.

'This matter' is incorrect; it should be 'This method'. 'Toscan remember' seems to be a typo and is corrected to 'tasks to remember'. Also, 'make it easier' should be 'makes it easier' to agree with the singular subject 'repeating information aloud and associating it' considered as a singular activity.