Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного неструктурирован и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь строить ответ с чётким вступлением, затем привести примеры, используя связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things, especially memorable moments. However, I sometimes find it difficult to remember people's names because they don't stick in my mind easily.

提案: Ответ содержит повторения и нечеткую структуру. Используйте связующие слова и избегайте излишней простоты, чтобы сделать ответ более естественным и связным.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as my email password. This has been a real problem for me, and I often struggle to recall it when needed.

提案: Ответ немного разрозненный и содержит лишние паузы. Сформулируйте предложение более плавно, используя связующие слова и конкретизируя детали.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my plans, including household chores and work-related tasks, to stay organized and efficient.

提案: Ответ можно сделать более естественным и грамматически правильным, используя правильные формы глаголов и связующие слова.

例: Nowadays, I have gotten used to writing down important things so that I don't forget them.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things, especially I memorize the moments perfectly.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorizing things, especially memorizing moments perfectly.

The phrase 'especially I memorize the moments perfectly' is incorrect because after 'especially' a gerund form should be used to maintain parallel structure. The correct form is 'especially memorizing moments perfectly'. This improves sentence flow and grammatical correctness.

× However, sometimes it's hard. To memorize the names for me.

✓ However, sometimes it's hard for me to memorize names.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'To memorize the names for me' is not a complete sentence. Combining the two parts into one sentence with correct word order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× For example my e-mail password.

✓ For example, my e-mail password.

A comma is needed after 'For example' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause. This is a punctuation issue related to article usage and sentence clarity.

× So I am struggling with this problem alot.

✓ So I am struggling with this problem a lot.

The word 'alot' is incorrect; the correct form is two words 'a lot' when indicating a large amount. This is a common quantifier error.

× In my daily life, I have to remember my daily plans, for example in terms of my household chores and also about my work. Tasks.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember my daily plans, for example, my household chores and also my work tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkwardly structured. 'About my work. Tasks.' is incorrect. Combining and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Nowadays I'm getting used to write down the things that I have to remember in order not to forget about them.

✓ Nowadays I'm getting used to writing down the things that I have to remember in order not to forget them.

After the phrase 'getting used to', the verb should be in the gerund (-ing) form, so 'write' should be 'writing'. Also, 'forget about them' is better as 'forget them' for conciseness and correctness.