Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答语法和表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，影响了表达的自然性和有效性。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I need a lot of time to learn new information. For example, I spend a lot of time memorising new English words.

提案: 回答中有很多语法错误和不连贯的表达，建议使用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并提供具体的例子。

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once forgot about a meeting with my friend.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，词汇使用不准确。建议用简单句子表达日常需要记住的事情，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to drink water and eat food. Also, I remember to do swimming and yoga to keep my body healthy.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和发音错误，表达不清晰。建议用简单句子说明如何记住重要的事情，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: I use the reminder app on my phone to remember important things because I use my phone every day.

× I don't have a good memory things very much because I can speed along time to learning new information and knowledge E for example I can speed.

✓ I don't have a good memory for things very much because I can spend a lot of time learning new information and knowledge. For example, I can spend a lot of time learning new English words.

这里“memory things”中“things”应加介词“for”变成“memory for things”，表示记忆的对象；“speed along time”应为“spend a lot of time”，表示花费大量时间；“learning knew English words”中“knew”应为“new”，表示新的单词。整体句子中复数和单数的使用不当，需调整。

× I can speed. A lot of time to learning knew English words, so I don't have very good.

✓ I can spend a lot of time learning new English words, so I don't have a very good memory.

动词“spend”后应接“a lot of time”，后面接动名词“learning”表示正在进行的动作；“knew”应为“new”；句尾缺少“memory”使句子不完整。

× I already forget there.

✓ I already forgot it.

“already”表示过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去式“forgot”；“there”用词不当，应使用代词“it”指代之前提到的事情。

× I was, can forget are very important things.

✓ I can forget very important things.

句子中“was”多余且时态错误，应去掉；“can forget”表示能力，后面不需要“are”；“are”用法错误，应删除。

× I think in my daily life I need to remember or to drink what turn on T and eat food.

✓ I think in my daily life I need to remember to drink water and eat food.

“remember or to drink what turn on T”结构混乱，应改为“remember to drink water”；“turn on T”无意义，推测为“water”；介词使用错误，需调整句子结构。

× Also I can remember to swimming, yoga to keep my body.

✓ Also I can remember to swim and do yoga to keep my body healthy.

“remember to swimming”中“to”后应接动词原形“swim”，而非动名词“swimming”；“yoga”前应加动词“do”表示进行瑜伽运动；补充“healthy”使句子完整。

× I already, uh, to uh, yours a pee pee on my phones to remember importances because I I iOS phones on every days so I can use it.

✓ I already use a app on my phone to remember important things because I use my iOS phone every day so I can use it.

“yours a pee pee”应为“use an app”；“phones”应为单数“phone”；“importances”应为“important things”；“on every days”应为“every day”；句子中介词和词汇使用错误较多，需整体调整。