Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，且句子结构混乱。建议练习用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点，同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising short pieces of information. For example, during exams, I can remember key points or important formulas easily, especially for subjects like Chinese or music.

提案: 回答内容较为完整，但表达不够流畅，句子连接不够自然。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并尝试用更丰富的词汇描述情境。

例: Yes, I often forget important things, such as my friends' birthdays. Since each friend has a different birthday, it can be hard to remember all of them, and sometimes my friends feel upset when I forget.

提案: 回答中有较多语法和词汇错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体细节支持，同时注意词汇的准确使用。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the things I have to buy, like vegetables or other groceries. My mother often asks me to help with shopping, so I usually make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且句子不连贯。建议练习使用正确的句子结构，清晰表达方法，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I usually make a to-do list to remember important things, such as what I need to buy. Also, I set reminders on my phone for important events like exams or meetings.

× I think I'm good at memorize some shots think but not long thing.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing some short things but not long things.

动词短语 'good at' 后面应该接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。这里 'memorize' 应改为 'memorizing'。另外，'shots think' 应为 'short things'，'long thing' 应为复数 'long things'。

× I think I'm good at memorize some shots think but not long thing.

✓ I think I'm good at memorizing some short things but not long things.

名词复数形式错误，'shots think' 应为 'short things'，'long thing' 应为复数 'long things'。

× So when I was when I have some exam, I'm good at 2:00 during some of the examples.

✓ So when I had some exams, I'm good at memorizing during some of the exams.

描述过去的事情时，动词时态应为过去式，'have' 应改为 'had'。

× So when I was when I have some exam, I'm good at 2:00 during some of the examples.

✓ So when I had some exams, I'm good at memorizing during some of the exams.

名词复数形式错误，'exam' 应为复数 'exams'。

× For example Chinese exam for some for some odd codes or for some.

✓ For example, Chinese exams for some odd codes or for some songs.

名词复数形式错误，'exam' 应为复数 'exams'。

× For example Chinese exam for some for some odd codes or for some. Songs, but for the.

✓ For example, Chinese exams for some odd codes or for some songs, but for the rest, no.

名词复数形式错误，'Songs' 应为 'songs'，且句子不完整，补充完整。

× For examples of some of my friend birthday, even though they are.

✓ For example, some of my friends' birthdays, even though they are.

名词复数和所有格错误，'friend' 应为复数 'friends'，'birthday' 应为复数 'birthdays'，且应使用所有格 'friends''。

× For examples of some of my friend birthday, even though they are. Very important but different friend.

✓ For example, some of my friends' birthdays, even though they are very important, but different friends.

代词使用错误，'friend' 应为复数 'friends'，保持一致。

× For examples of some of my friend birthday, even though they are. Very important but different friend.

✓ For example, some of my friends' birthdays, even though they are very important, but different friends.

名词复数形式错误，'friend' 应为复数 'friends'。

× They have different birthday so it's not easy to remember that and some friend may feel angry because I forgot their birthday.

✓ They have different birthdays so it's not easy to remember them and some friends may feel angry because I forgot their birthdays.

名词复数形式错误，'birthday' 应为复数 'birthdays'，'friend' 应为复数 'friends'。

× Uh, in my day, like I should remember something I need to buy Cintas today because my mom often called me to help her to buy something like the echo, the vegetables.

✓ Uh, in my day, I should remember something I need to buy today because my mom often calls me to help her buy things like eggs and vegetables.

时态错误，描述习惯动作时应使用一般现在时，'called' 应改为 'calls'。

× Uh, in my day, like I should remember something I need to buy Cintas today because my mom often called me to help her to buy something like the echo, the vegetables.

✓ Uh, in my day, I should remember something I need to buy today because my mom often calls me to help her buy things like eggs and vegetables.

代词使用错误，'Cintas' 和 'echo' 可能是误听，应改为 'eggs'，'things' 更合适。

× So I need to have police to remember what should I buy today?

✓ So I need to have a list to remember what I should buy today.

代词和词汇错误，'police' 应为 'list'，且疑问句语序错误，应为陈述句。

× If not, I'm easy to forget everything if I did not do a list for remember that.

✓ If not, I'm likely to forget everything if I do not make a list to remember that.

代词和动词搭配错误，'easy to forget' 应为 'likely to forget'，'did not do a list' 应为 'do not make a list'。

× I usually make A to do list to remember the important thing like what should I buy today?

✓ I usually make a to-do list to remember important things like what I should buy today.

量词和名词搭配错误，'A to do list' 应为 'a to-do list'，'important thing' 应为复数 'important things'。

× As I said before an also. I will have the candidate that message Max mass something important, for example that day I have a exam and what's the time basis or I have a meeting in that they are also will Max.

✓ As I said before, I also have reminders or messages for something important. For example, on the day I have an exam and the time, or if I have a meeting, I will also set reminders.

代词和词汇错误，句子结构混乱，'candidate that message Max mass' 应为 'reminders or messages'，'a exam' 应为 'an exam'，句子需重组。