Memory— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Are you good at memorising things?
受験者
No, I wouldn't consider myself good at memorizing things. I often find that information goes into one ear and out the other. And Isaako to remember important dates like my mother's or my girlfriend's birthday. And I also rely heavily on technology in order to keep track of special events.
試験官
Have you ever forgotten something important?
受験者
Yes, one time I completely forgot my girlfriends birthday because I was very busy with work and it made her really disappointed. However, I tried to apologize her and promised that I would never let it happen again and fortunately she forgave me. Since then I always try to remember important thing carefully.
試験官
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
受験者
In my daily life, there are many important things I need to remember. Firstly, I need to keep track of my work schedule because it directly effects my performance at work. Moreover, I always remind myself to call my mother regularly because family is very important to me.
試験官
How do you remember important things?
受験者
I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For example, whenever an idea pops into my head, I dropped it down immediately by using my phones note taking apps. Moreover, I use calendar apps to keep track of my work schedule and reminds me of special events.
評価
総合
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có vẻ không tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như câu "And Isaako to remember..." không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các câu không hoàn chỉnh và cố gắng sử dụng các câu đơn giản, rõ ràng, đồng thời tránh lặp lại từ ngữ không cần thiết.
例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget information quickly, especially important dates like my mother's or my girlfriend's birthday. Therefore, I rely a lot on technology, such as calendar apps, to help me remember special events.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
スコア: 75.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như "apologize her" nên là "apologize to her" và "important thing" nên là "important things". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được làm rõ hơn bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối các ý một cách mạch lạc hơn.
例: Yes, I once completely forgot my girlfriend's birthday because I was very busy with work, which made her really disappointed. However, I apologized to her and promised that it would never happen again. Fortunately, she forgave me, and since then, I have been more careful to remember important dates.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
スコア: 80.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và sửa lỗi chính tả như "effects" nên là "affects". Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: In my daily life, I need to remember several important things. Firstly, keeping track of my work schedule is essential because it directly affects my performance. Additionally, I make sure to call my mother regularly since family means a lot to me.
How do you remember important things?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến thì động từ và số nhiều, ví dụ "dropped it down" nên là "write it down" hoặc "note it down", "phones note taking apps" nên là "phone's note-taking apps", và "reminds" nên là "remind" để phù hợp với chủ ngữ số nhiều. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
例: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For instance, whenever an idea pops into my head, I immediately write it down using my phone's note-taking apps. Moreover, I use calendar apps to keep track of my work schedule and to remind me of special events.
文法
× And Isaako to remember important dates like my mother's or my girlfriend's birthday.
✓ And I also struggle to remember important dates like my mother's or my girlfriend's birthday.
The original sentence contains a non-word 'Isaako' which seems to be a typo or incorrect usage. The corrected sentence replaces it with 'I also struggle' to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.
× However, I tried to apologize her and promised that I would never let it happen again and fortunately she forgave me.
✓ However, I tried to apologize to her and promised that I would never let it happen again and fortunately she forgave me.
The verb 'apologize' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Omitting 'to' is incorrect. The correction adds 'to' to properly link the verb and the pronoun.
× Since then I always try to remember important thing carefully.
✓ Since then I always try to remember important things carefully.
The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple important items to remember. Using singular here is incorrect.
× Firstly, I need to keep track of my work schedule because it directly effects my performance at work.
✓ Firstly, I need to keep track of my work schedule because it directly affects my performance at work.
The verb 'effects' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'affects' meaning 'to influence'. 'Effects' is a noun or means 'to bring about' which does not fit the context.
× For example, whenever an idea pops into my head, I dropped it down immediately by using my phones note taking apps.
✓ For example, whenever an idea pops into my head, I write it down immediately by using my phone's note-taking apps.
The phrase 'dropped it down' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'write it down' to mean recording an idea. Also, 'phones' should be possessive 'phone's' and 'note taking' should be hyphenated as 'note-taking'.
× Moreover, I use calendar apps to keep track of my work schedule and reminds me of special events.
✓ Moreover, I use calendar apps to keep track of my work schedule and they remind me of special events.
The subject 'calendar apps' is plural, so the verb should be 'remind' not 'reminds'. Also, the sentence needs a subject for the second verb, so 'they' is added.
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