Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺失，建议直接回答问题，表达你是否擅长记忆，并简要说明原因。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often use repetition and association techniques to help me remember information.

提案: 回答时应更连贯，避免语法错误和口语化表达，且补充更多细节说明事件的影响和改进措施。

例: Yes, when I was in primary school, I forgot my best friend's birthday. It was very embarrassing because I value our friendship a lot. Since then, I have tried to keep a calendar to remember important dates.

提案: 回答应更具体，说明具体需要记住的事项，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my class schedule, homework deadlines, and upcoming exams because they are essential for my studies.

提案: 回答中应避免重复，使用更准确的表达，并举例说明具体使用的技术或方法。

例: To remember important things, I usually use my smartphone's calendar app and write notes in a planner, which helps me stay organized and not forget important tasks.

× Yes, one I was in primary school I forgot my best friends birthday.

✓ Yes, once when I was in primary school, I forgot my best friend's birthday.

这里需要使用过去时态来描述过去发生的事情。'one' 应改为 'once' 表示曾经，'best friends birthday' 应为 'best friend's birthday'，表示单数所有格。

× It was embarrassing and disappointing to me because 'cause I value our friendship a lot.

✓ It was embarrassing and disappointing to me because I value our friendship a lot.

'because' 和 'cause' 是重复使用，应该去掉其中一个，保持句子连贯。

× From that time I tried to. Keep things down right?

✓ From that time, I tried to keep things written down, right?

句子结构不完整，'tried to' 后面需要接动词不定式，'keep things down' 不够明确，应该是 'keep things written down' 表示记下来。

× Well, there are a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life.

✓ Well, there are a lot of things I need to remember in my daily life.

该句无语法错误，复数使用正确，无需修改。

× You know, I have many exams I have to prepare for next.

✓ You know, I have many exams I have to prepare for next.

句子缺少时间状语，建议补充 'next week/month' 等具体时间，但语法本身无误。

× When it comes to remember important things, I would say I use technologies to help me remember important things.

✓ When it comes to remembering important things, I would say I use technology to help me remember important things.

'When it comes to' 后面应接动名词，故 'remember' 应改为 'remembering'。'technologies' 一般用单数 'technology' 表示技术。

× Also I would like to write important things down becauses I wouldn't forget them anymore.

✓ Also, I would like to write important things down because I wouldn't forget them anymore.

'becauses' 拼写错误，应为 'because'。句子中 'wouldn't forget them anymore' 语义上可以接受，但更自然的表达是 'so that I won't forget them anymore'。