Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often find it difficult, which makes me feel stressed. For example, sometimes I give up when I can't remember something important. However, I am trying to improve this skill by practising regularly.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Make sure to answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas effectively.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot my appointment because I didn't write it down. This taught me to use reminders to avoid such mistakes in the future.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected by linking words. Use specific examples and correct grammar to make your answer natural and effective.

例: One important thing I need to remember daily is my phone. I use apps that help me by repeating information, such as reminders for tasks or shopping lists. This way, I don't forget important things.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks a direct response. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence about your method of remembering important things, then add specific supporting details with linking words. Use simple and correct English to express your ideas.

例: I usually try to remember important things by making notes or setting reminders on my phone. This helps me keep track of tasks and reduces the chance of forgetting them.

× I feel very difficult to memorizing something.

✓ I find it very difficult to memorise something.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'feel' with 'difficult to memorizing'. The verb 'feel' should be followed by an adjective and an infinitive form without '-ing'. The correct structure is 'find it difficult to memorise'. Also, 'memorising' should be in the base form after 'to'.

× Are so it's making me feel very stressful, Ann.

✓ So it's making me feel very stressed, Ann.

The phrase 'Are so' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, but the speaker's feeling is 'stressed'. The correct adjective to describe a person's feeling is 'stressed'.

× Make me. Give giving up in some situation.

✓ It makes me want to give up in some situations.

The original sentences are fragments and lack proper structure. 'Make me' and 'Give giving up' are incomplete. The corrected sentence uses a proper subject and verb structure to express the intended meaning clearly.

× But I think I will try my best to. Improve it.

✓ But I think I will try my best to improve it.

The sentence is split incorrectly with a period after 'to'. The infinitive verb 'improve' should directly follow 'to' without a period. This correction maintains the future tense and proper sentence flow.

× I'm usually forgotten something important because I am the.

✓ I usually forget something important because I can't remember everything for a long time.

'I'm usually forgotten' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I usually forget' to express habitual action. Also, 'because I am the' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to a clearer explanation. The verb tense is corrected to present simple for habitual actions.

× I can remember everything there in long time, so I think I can figure.

✓ I can't remember everything for a long time, so I think I can figure it out.

The original sentence has unclear meaning and incorrect structure. 'There in long time' is incorrect; it should be 'for a long time'. Also, 'figure' needs an object, so 'figure it out' is added to complete the meaning.

× I think one thing is very essential for me is my phone.

✓ I think one thing that is very essential for me is my phone.

The sentence lacks the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clauses properly. Adding 'that' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have app is. Repeating information allows, so when I want to add items I want.

✓ I have an app that repeats information, so when I want to add items, it helps me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I have app is' is incorrect; it should be 'I have an app that'. 'Repeating information allows' is incomplete; corrected to 'repeats information'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes they give me the the informations I will.

✓ Sometimes it gives me the information I need.

'The the informations' is incorrect; 'information' is uncountable and does not take a plural form or double definite article. Also, 'I will' is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'I need' for clarity.

× I think it's depend on my range I am forgetting.

✓ I think it depends on how much I am forgetting.

'It's depend' is incorrect; the verb should be 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'my range I am forgetting' is unclear; corrected to 'how much I am forgetting' for clarity.

× I have a plug it in mind, so I think it is very in very difficult to me to tell you how to fix it, how to remember important things, but I think I can take it and improve it.

✓ I have a plug in my mind, so I think it is very difficult for me to tell you how to fix it or how to remember important things, but I think I can work on it and improve.

The original sentence has several errors: 'plug it in mind' should be 'plug in my mind'; 'very in very difficult to me' is incorrect, corrected to 'very difficult for me'; conjunctions and sentence flow are improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.