Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，直接回答问题并补充具体细节，避免重复。

例: I am not very good at memorising things, especially subjects like math. However, I find it easier to remember things that interest me, such as vocabulary related to my hobbies.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用完整句子并补充具体细节，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring my music equipment to the Crossland Music Festival last month. It was stressful because I had little time to fix the problem.

提案: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用具体例子支持。

例: I need to remember to drink enough water every day because it is essential for my health. Sometimes I forget and feel tired or have headaches.

提案: 回答较为简单且有语法错误，建议使用更自然的表达并补充细节说明方法的效果。

例: I usually remember important things by taking notes on my phone or in a notebook. This helps me stay organized and not forget my tasks.

× Actually it depends on the things I like or not.

✓ Actually it depends on the things I like or don't like.

这里的句子结构不完整，缺少否定部分，导致表达不清。应补充完整的否定形式以表达“是否喜欢”的意思。

× for about learning the math, learning the school subjects.

✓ for learning math and school subjects.

“the math”中“math”作为学科名词通常不加冠词，且“learning the school subjects”中“school subjects”复数形式正确，但表达更简洁。

× I I thought it was difficult for me to learn to memorize things like the the words or the points

✓ I thought it was difficult for me to memorize things like words or points.

“the words”与“the points”前的定冠词不必要，且“learn to memorize”表达重复，应简化为“memorize”。

× I just forgot a on the music equipment during the last month or the activity called the Crossland Music Festival.

✓ I just forgot some music equipment last month during an activity called the Crossland Music Festival.

“a on the music equipment”结构错误，music equipment通常不可数或复数，且“last month”不需要“the”，活动前应使用不定冠词。

× I just forgot a on the music equipment during the last month or the activity called the Crossland Music Festival.

✓ I just forgot some music equipment last month during an activity called the Crossland Music Festival.

“forgot a on the music equipment”中“on”用法错误，应去掉“on”或改为正确介词。

× I think is drink water drinking water here because order place an essential role for body.

✓ I think drinking water here is important because it plays an essential role for the body.

“order place”用词错误，应为“plays a role”，“for body”缺少冠词“the”。

× But I I don't like drinking too much water so sometimes I need I have some problems about my skiing or just something becauses the lack of water.

✓ But I don't like drinking too much water, so sometimes I have some problems with my skin or something because of the lack of water.

“my skiing”应为“my skin”，“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”，“problems about”应改为“problems with”。

× I have some problems about my skiing or just something becauses the lack of water.

✓ I have some problems with my skin or something because of the lack of water.

“problems about”应改为“problems with”，“because the lack of water”应为“because of the lack of water”。

× I just, I will remember the important things by taking notes.

✓ I will remember important things by taking notes.

句中“I just,”多余且影响流畅，应去掉。

× Yes, I will come put it in my phone or just write it down to Remember Me to the import to make do the important things.

✓ Yes, I will put it in my phone or just write it down to remind myself to do important things.

句子结构混乱，“come put it in my phone”不正确，应为“put it in my phone”，“Remember Me to the import to make do the important things”语法错误，改为“remind myself to do important things”。