Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议加强语法基础，避免重复和无关内容，回答应更简洁且逻辑清晰。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I was a child, I often practiced memorising poems and stories, which helped me improve my memory and perform better at school.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和句子不完整，建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always make a list before I leave. This helps me remember all the tasks I need to do and avoid forgetting anything. For example, when I go shopping, I write down everything I need to buy.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议先明确主题句，再用具体细节支持，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study schedule and important tasks. For example, I often remind myself to review lessons and complete assignments on time.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚说明方法并举例说明。

例: I usually make a list to remember important things. For example, when I go shopping, I write down the items I need to buy so that I don't forget anything important.

× Yes, I think I have a good memorize.

✓ Yes, I think I have a good memory.

memorize 是动词，表示“记忆”，这里需要名词 memory 表示“记忆力”。

× when I was a child I open practice memorizing poems and stories which helped me improve my ability to remember.

✓ when I was a child I often practiced memorizing poems and stories which helped me improve my ability to remember.

句中 open 应为 often，表示频率；practice 应用过去式 practiced，因为描述过去的动作。

× And that it helped me a lot at school.

✓ And that helped me a lot at school.

句子中多余的 it 导致结构错误，应去掉 it。

× Disability has always been useful in my dad.

✓ My dad has always been very helpful to me.

原句结构混乱，disability（残疾）与上下文不符，应改为表达父亲对自己的帮助。

× No, I have never forgetting anything important because I always like to make a list before I leave.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything important because I always like to make a list before I leave.

have never 后应接过去分词 forgotten，而不是现在分词 forgetting。

× Make a list to help me remember all the tasks I need to do and avoid forgetting anything.

✓ I make a list to help me remember all the tasks I need to do and avoid forgetting anything.

句子缺少主语，应加上 I。

× For example, when I go to shopping, I write down everything I need to buy.

✓ For example, when I go shopping, I write down everything I need to buy.

go shopping 是固定搭配，不需要介词 to。

× Oh my daily like I need to remember some about a study.

✓ Oh, in my daily life I need to remember some things about my study.

句子结构混乱，缺少介词和冠词，表达不完整。

× Take a knowledge and.

✓ I need to gain knowledge.

原句不完整且表达不清，应改为完整句子。

× I needed to do something so.

✓ I need to do something.

时态错误且句子不完整，应使用现在时并补全句子。

× I I open my colista to remember important anything of for example when I go to the shop shopping I will write down.

✓ I often use my list to remember important things. For example, when I go shopping, I write things down.

句子结构混乱，单词拼写错误（colista 应为 list），重复单词，需重组句子。

× I need anything so that avoid forgetting.

✓ I write down what I need so that I avoid forgetting.

缺少主语和谓语，且表达不完整，需补充完整句子。

× Important thing.

✓ Important things.

单独的短语不完整，应补充为完整句子或复数形式。