Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, so I usually use apps like Google Calendar to keep track of my schedule and tasks.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议使用完整句子并合理连接信息，使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I once forgot a hospital appointment. A few days later, I received an email from the hospital reminding me about it, and then I realized I had missed it.

提案: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不完整且不连贯。建议先明确主题句，再用具体细节支持，并注意语法准确。

例: I need to remember my school schedule every day because I am a student. Each class has a different time and location, so I have to keep track of them carefully.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，存在发音或拼写错误。建议用完整句子表达，并具体说明使用的工具和方法。

例: I usually use apps like Google Calendar or my phone's notes to remember important appointments and tasks.

× I think I'm not quite good at memorizing things, but I usually rely on under apps which is like Google Calendar to mark my schedules or what I need to do, otherwise I will really forget about that.

✓ I think I'm not quite good at memorizing things, but I usually rely on some apps like Google Calendar to mark my schedules or what I need to do; otherwise, I will really forget about that.

这里“under apps”应为“some apps”，因为“under”是介词，不适合用来修饰“apps”。另外，“which is like Google Calendar”应改为“like Google Calendar”，更符合表达习惯。建议使用“some apps”表示一些应用程序。

× Yes, absolutely. I forgot my. Appointment before which is a hospital appointment and after a few days and I received the e-mail from the hospital then I realized that I forgot the appointment.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I forgot my appointment before, which was a hospital appointment, and after a few days I received an e-mail from the hospital; then I realized that I had forgotten the appointment.

句中“forgot my. Appointment before which is a hospital appointment”结构混乱，应调整为“forgot my appointment before, which was a hospital appointment”。另外，描述过去发生且在另一过去时间之前的动作时，应该用过去完成时“had forgotten”。

× You're surely. It must be my schedule to go to school because I'm a studio right now in my. Each day of the class is different and the time is difference, so I need to remember about the time and location of my classes.

✓ Surely, it must be my schedule to go to school because I'm a student right now. Each day the class is different and the time is different, so I need to remember the time and location of my classes.

“You're surely.”不符合语法，应改为“Surely,”。另外，“I'm a studio”应为“I'm a student”，“in my.”不完整，应删除。最后，“the time is difference”应为“the time is different”，形容词用法错误。

× I usually rely on the apps an like the Google Calendar or the. Nook spoke to remember the important's schedule.

✓ I usually rely on apps like Google Calendar or the Nook app to remember important schedules.

“an like”应为“like”，“the. Nook spoke”应为“the Nook app”，且“important's schedule”中“important's”错误，应为“important schedules”。此外，去掉多余的冠词，使表达更自然。