Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более связным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте разрывов и повторов, используйте связующие слова для плавности речи. Также стоит расширить ответ, добавив конкретные примеры или причины.

例: I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially when I'm stressed or overwhelmed. Therefore, I try to write everything down to help me remember important information.

提案: Ответ содержит много пауз и грамматических ошибок, что затрудняет понимание. Следует говорить более связно, избегать ненужных звуков и уточнять детали ситуации.

例: Yes, I once forgot the deadline for my exams, which was very stressful because I had to rush to prepare and I even skipped meals that day.

提案: Ответ слишком краткий и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать полные предложения и более разнообразную лексику, а также связать идеи с помощью союзов.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my university and training schedules. It's also very important to keep track of deadlines for exams and assignments.

提案: Ответ содержит повторы и нечеткие формулировки. Рекомендуется строить предложения более плавно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: I use Google Calendar to keep track of important dates, and I also write to-do lists on my iPhone. These methods really help me remember different tasks.

× Specially a lot of things like slipped my mind when I'm stressed or.

✓ Especially a lot of things like slipping my mind when I'm stressed or overwhelmed.

The word 'Specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'Especially'. Also, 'slipped' should be in the gerund form 'slipping' to fit the sentence structure. Use 'especially' to emphasize particular cases.

× So I tried to. Write everything down to remember.

✓ So I try to write everything down to remember.

The sentence is fragmented and the tense is inconsistent. 'Tried to' suggests past, but the context implies a habitual action, so present tense 'try to' is appropriate. Also, the period after 'to' is incorrect.

× I forgotten the deadline of my exams.

✓ I forgot the deadline of my exams.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Since the sentence refers to a specific past event, simple past 'forgot' is correct.

× It was, it was the worst thing ever because I had to. Alright, is Sam and I didn't eat.

✓ It was the worst thing ever because I had to stay up late, and I didn't eat.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be restructured to convey the meaning properly. 'Alright, is Sam' seems to be a mishearing or error; replaced with a plausible correction.

× An training schedule.

✓ A training schedule.

The article 'An' is used before vowel sounds; 'training' starts with a consonant sound, so 'A' is correct.

× Also very important to remember some deadline for exams and for SN.

✓ Also very important to remember some deadlines for exams and for SN.

'Deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match 'some'. Also, 'for' is correctly used here.

× I have at first I have Google Calendar.

✓ First, I have Google Calendar.

The phrase 'I have at first I have' is redundant and incorrect. Simplify to 'First, I have Google Calendar' to express the idea clearly.

× And. I also every time I. Write to do lists in my iPhone.

✓ And I also write to-do lists on my iPhone every time.

The adverbial phrase 'every time' is misplaced and the sentence is fragmented. Correct placement improves clarity. Also, 'to do lists' should be hyphenated as 'to-do lists', and 'in my iPhone' should be 'on my iPhone'.