Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达，句子结构混乱，且未能直接回答问题。建议练习用简洁明了的句子直接回答问题，并使用适当的连接词使表达更自然。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I usually write important notes on my phone so that I don't forget them.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，且缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子描述一次忘记重要事情的经历，并使用连接词使叙述更流畅。

例: Yes, I once forgot to arrive at the airport on time for my flight home. I was rushing and heard my name being called, which made me realize my mistake.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议明确说明日常需要记住的具体事项，并用连词连接句子，使表达更完整。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember the types of food I buy because I have to pay for meals and lunch for my family.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，且信息不连贯。建议用简单明了的句子说明记忆重要事情的方法，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: I usually circle important dates on my calendar or set reminders on my phone to remember important tasks like paying taxes or renewing my driver's license.

× If I go to M, not really good at memory since.

✓ If I go to M, I am not really good at memorizing things.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整。需要补充完整的主语和谓语，使句子通顺。

× I'm praying for what down?

✓ I'm praying for what is going down?

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清楚。需要补充完整谓语。

× Or why don't wait on my phone so that it's not easy to forget?

✓ Or why don't I wait on my phone so that it's not easy to forget?

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。需要补充主语使句子完整。

× I had a holiday then I already bought a ticket home.

✓ I had a holiday then I had already bought a ticket home.

描述过去发生的动作时，应该使用过去完成时表示先发生的动作。

× But I remember the one time my I rushed it arrived airport.

✓ But I remember the one time when I rushed to the airport.

句子结构混乱，缺少连词和介词，导致表达不清楚。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I rushed it arrived airport.

✓ I rushed to the airport.

动词rush后应接介词to表示方向，原句中介词使用错误。

× I hear that the airport will calling my name.

✓ I heard that the airport was calling my name.

时态错误且句子结构不完整，应该使用过去时态并调整句子结构。

× I realized that I remember.

✓ I realized that I had forgotten.

原句中代词使用不当，表达意思不清楚。需要用正确的代词和动词形式表达。

× I saying Oh my daily life I need to to remember **** **** of food because I have to pay for meal and lunch for my families.

✓ I am saying in my daily life I need to remember the amount of food because I have to pay for meals and lunch for my family.

代词使用错误，复数形式错误，句子结构混乱。需要调整代词和名词的单复数形式。

× So I need to know what what material is is the.

✓ So I need to know what materials they are.

形容词和名词使用错误，句子不完整。需要正确使用名词复数和动词。

× Are you really circle it on the Canada?

✓ I really circle it on the calendar.

代词使用错误，句子主语和宾语不匹配。需要使用正确的代词和名词。

× Can calendar bullet sample?

✓ I use bullet points on the calendar.

形容词和名词搭配错误，句子不完整。需要调整词语搭配使句子通顺。

× I haven't asked for my G drive license and the task for my house tax.

✓ I haven't applied for my driver's license and paid the house tax.

句子结构混乱，表达不清楚。需要调整句子结构和用词。

× I only circulates or on my phone.

✓ I only circle them on my phone.

代词使用错误，动词形式错误。需要使用正确的代词和动词形式。