Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài dòng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget details quickly. However, I try to improve by practicing regularly and using memory techniques like making associations.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và chi tiết hơn để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as my house keys or the deadline to submit my exam paper. It caused me a lot of trouble, but now I try to be more careful and organised.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối phù hợp. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my keys because forgetting them can cause a lot of trouble. Also, I have to keep track of important deadlines, like submitting my exam papers on time.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng vẫn còn lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp lại từ và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Hãy mô tả chi tiết hơn về cách bạn ghi chú để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

例: I usually write notes and stick them on my desk so that I can see them every morning. This method helps me remember important tasks and deadlines effectively.

× I have a brain of a goldfish

✓ I have the brain of a goldfish

In English, when referring to a specific metaphorical concept like 'the brain of a goldfish', the definite article 'the' is used instead of 'a'. This is because it refers to a known, specific idea rather than any brain of a goldfish.

× memorizing Tanis and really not my cup of tea

✓ memorizing things is really not my cup of tea

The original sentence has a typo 'Tanis' instead of 'things' and lacks the verb 'is' to connect the subject and complement. The phrase 'not my cup of tea' requires a subject and verb to be grammatically correct.

× while memorizing things will help me too. To make me fulfill my brain and yes, my brain like a cup of water.

✓ while memorizing things will help me too, to improve my brain, which is like a cup of water.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connectors. 'To make me fulfill my brain' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction connects ideas properly and clarifies the metaphor.

× So yeah, I'm not good at memory.

✓ So yeah, I'm not good at memorizing things.

The phrase 'good at memory' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'good at memorizing things' or 'good at memory tasks'.

× Well I have forgotten a lot of things really important like my keys house ought to do date to turn over my exams paper while it is really important and I get the.

✓ Well, I have forgotten a lot of really important things like my house keys and the due date to turn in my exam paper, which is really important.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. It lacks proper punctuation and word order. The correction clarifies the objects forgotten and corrects the phrase 'turn over my exams paper' to 'turn in my exam paper'.

× I get the. I get something really, really bad, but now I quite remembered now.

✓ I got into some really bad trouble, but now I quite remember it.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect tense. 'I get the' is incomplete. The correction uses past tense 'got' for past events and present tense 'remember' for current state.

× So yeah, it is really an I never forget insulting reported with now.

✓ So yeah, now I really never forget important things.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect pronouns and words. The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper pronouns and vocabulary.

× So I really need to remember that I need to bring my. Keys and which cause a lot of trouble when I could get in several hours.

✓ So I really need to remember to bring my keys, which cause a lot of trouble when I can't get in for several hours.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses 'which cause' incorrectly without a clear antecedent. The correction connects the ideas properly and fixes the modal verb usage.

× Also I need to remember the due date too. Turn over my exam.

✓ Also, I need to remember the due date to turn in my exam.

The phrase 'turn over my exam' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'turn in' when submitting something.

× Well, I usually write a note which I stick to my table, so. And so at the morning I could see. Important things.

✓ Well, I usually write a note which I stick to my table, so in the morning I can see important things.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect word order. The correction combines the ideas into a coherent sentence with proper tense and word order.