Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and using correct tense. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. In fact, I often forget recent events, which I find quite frustrating.

提案: Avoid repeating similar words like 'frustrating' and 'annoying' together. Use linking words to explain your feelings clearly and keep your answer concise.

例: Yes, it happens quite often. For example, I sometimes forget important appointments, which makes me feel really frustrated because I can't understand why my memory fails me.

提案: Make your answer clearer by structuring it properly and using linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary like 'concepts' instead of 'concept'.

例: Currently, since my exams are ongoing, I need to remember important concepts and questions that I have to study for my tests.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid short, fragmented sentences. Also, use more formal vocabulary like 'note down' instead of 'jotted'.

例: I usually note down important information and review it daily. This method helps me remember things more easily and efficiently.

× I always forgot the things and I'm not able to memorize things properly.

✓ I always forget things and I'm not able to memorize things properly.

The sentence mixes past tense 'forgot' with present context indicated by 'always' and 'I'm not able'. The verb should be in present tense 'forget' to match the ongoing situation.

× I just forget the things that are even more important for me

✓ I just forget things that are even more important to me

The phrase 'the things' is unnecessarily definite; 'things' without 'the' is more natural here. Also, 'important for me' should be 'important to me' as 'to' is the correct preposition for importance in English.

× I find it so frustrating and annoying sometimes that why can't I remember anything.

✓ I find it so frustrating and annoying sometimes that I wonder why I can't remember anything.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'that why' which is ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to include 'I wonder why' to form a correct and meaningful sentence.

× Now it is as my exams are going on, so I think I need to remember my concept and questions that I might have to learn for my examination.

✓ Now, as my exams are going on, I think I need to remember my concepts and questions that I have to learn for my examination.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect singular/plural usage. 'Concept' should be plural 'concepts' to match 'questions'. Also, 'might have to learn' is better as 'have to learn' to express necessity.

× I don't remember important things but if I am in need so I just jotted everything down and just practice every day. That helps me remember the things easily and. Efficiently.

✓ I don't remember important things, but if I need to, I just jot everything down and practice every day. That helps me remember things easily and efficiently.

The sentence has several issues: 'if I am in need so' is incorrect and should be 'if I need to'. 'Jotted' should be present tense 'jot' to match habitual action. The period after 'and' is incorrect and should be removed. Also, 'the things' is better as 'things' here.