Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I was in middle school, my teacher often asked us to remember important information from our books, and I was usually the first to recall it.

提案: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并具体说明忘记的重要物品和原因。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, once I was in a hurry to go to the airport and I forgot my ID card because I didn't have enough time to think clearly.

提案: 回答内容较为简单且有语法错误，建议列举更多具体内容，并使用连词使表达更自然。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my ID card, phone number, and home address. Besides these, I also have to remember the location of my workplace.

提案: 表达较为简单且断断续续，建议使用完整句子并增加细节说明方法的优点。

例: I usually write important things down on my phone using labels or notes. This method is convenient because I can easily check them anytime, and my phone reminds me so I don't forget.

× Yes, I could ask memory things, for example will lie in middle school.

✓ Yes, I could remember things, for example, when I was in middle school.

这里's memory things'用法错误，应该用动词'remember'来表达记忆事情，且句子结构不完整。'things'是复数，'memory'是不可数名词，不能直接修饰'things'。建议使用'remember things'。

× Our teacher implies our task to remember the books I always.

✓ Our teacher assigned us the task to always remember the books.

句子结构混乱，'implies our task'用法不当，应使用'assign'表示布置任务，'I always'位置错误，应放在动词前修饰。

× As the first person who carry memory the things.

✓ I was the first person who carried the memory of those things.

句子不完整且语法错误，'carry memory the things'不符合英语表达，应使用'carried the memory of those things'。

× So. I'm good at that.

✓ So, I'm good at that.

句子中断号使用不当，应使用逗号连接句子，使表达更连贯。

× I think everyone also have this this experience to forgotten something important like.

✓ I think everyone also has this experience of forgetting something important.

'everyone'是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式'has'，'experience'是单数，'to forgotten'错误，应使用动名词'forgetting'。

× That is like I busy to go airports but I forgot my ID card becauses in a hurry time I don't have many time to think.

✓ It was like I was busy going to the airport, but I forgot my ID card because I was in a hurry and didn't have much time to think.

时态不一致，描述过去事件应使用过去时，'busy to go'错误，应为'busy going'，'airports'应为单数'airport'，'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'，'many time'应为'much time'。

× In my daily life, I need a remember my ID card, my phone number and my. Address.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember my ID card, my phone number, and my address.

'need a remember'错误，应为'need to remember'，'Address'前不应有句号，且应与前面内容连贯。

× Besides this, we also need to remember the venue of work. Add.

✓ Besides this, we also need to remember the venue of work.

句尾的'Add.'无意义，应删除。

× I always write it down in my phone. Labels.

✓ I always write it down in my phone's notes.

'Labels'用法不当，手机中常用'notes'或'notes app'来记录信息，且'write it down in my phone'后应具体说明写在哪里。

× Because it's easy for me to check and can inform me to remember the important things.

✓ Because it's easy for me to check and it can remind me to remember important things.

句子缺少主语，'can inform me to remember'表达不自然，应改为'it can remind me'。

× And my phone always follow up with me.

✓ And my phone is always with me.

'follow up with me'用法错误，表达手机随身携带应使用'is always with me'。