Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，存在语法和表达错误，且部分内容不清晰。建议简化句子结构，确保表达完整且逻辑清晰。可以使用连接词使回答更自然。

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things because I usually make a plan. For example, I write a to-do list and check it every morning to remember what I need to do that day.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且内容重复。建议使用简单句表达经历，并说明原因或结果，避免重复。

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. However, I usually finish my tasks on time, so I rarely forget things. If I do forget, I try to complete them as soon as possible.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，数字顺序错误，句子不连贯。建议列举具体事项，使用完整句子，并保持逻辑顺序。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember three things. First, I take vitamin C every morning. Second, I study for my TOEFL test daily. Third, I make sure to complete my homework on time.

提案: 回答表达不流畅，存在语法错误和拼写错误。建议使用连贯的句子描述方法，并纠正拼写错误。

例: I remember important things in two ways. First, I make notes on my cellphone every day to keep track of my tasks. Second, I write sticky notes and put them on my desk as reminders.

× Before that, there lie.

✓ Before that, there lies.

这里的主语是单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式lie的正确形式是lies。

× I really forgotten something in.

✓ I really have forgotten something.

句子缺少助动词have，完成时态需要have + 过去分词forgotten。

× Because I usually do things before let them lie.

✓ Because I usually do things before letting them lie.

动词do后面接动名词形式，表示动作的先后顺序，let后面应使用动名词形式letting。

× There for a seldom forget things.

✓ Therefore, I seldom forget things.

错误使用了There for，应为Therefore表示因此，且缺少主语I。

× Anne if I forget things, I usually have time to do it.

✓ And if I forget things, I usually have time to do them.

Anne应为And，且things是复数，代词应使用them。

× First is 2.

✓ First is 2.

句子不完整，缺少具体内容，无法判断语法错误。

× 1st is to consume vitamin C every morning.

✓ The first is to consume vitamin C every morning.

序数词前应加定冠词the。

× Second is too.

✓ Second is too.

句子不完整，无法判断语法错误。

× Do my? TOEFL test every day.

✓ Do my TOEFL test every day.

句子中间多了问号，导致结构混乱，应去掉问号。

× First I will.

✓ First, I will.

句子不完整，缺少后续内容，且逗号用于分隔句子成分。

× Note on my cellphone everyday too.

✓ Take notes on my cellphone every day too.

动词note用法错误，应使用短语take notes表示记笔记。

× Let me keep in mind all things I need to do second.

✓ Let me keep in mind all the things I need to do.

缺少定冠词the，且句子结构不完整，应调整。

× I will write some pepper note to put on clear.

✓ I will write some paper notes to put on the clear.

pepper应为paper，句子结构不完整，缺少具体名词，且on clear不合适，应为on the clear surface或on the clear area。