Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议练习使用完整句子，避免断断续续，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I think I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily remember the outline of my homework at school. However, I sometimes forget the exact dates of activities.

提案: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱。建议练习用完整句子描述事件，注意时态和语法，使用连接词使叙述更连贯。

例: Yes, I remember once I forgot the time of football training. I am a member of my school football team, and I was late for the training. As a result, my head coach gave me a punishment.

提案: 回答较为简单，部分表达不准确。建议丰富细节，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: As a student, I need to remember important things like homework deadlines and the dates of school activities. Also, I have to keep track of the exact time and date for these events.

提案: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议练习用简单明了的句子描述方法，注意语法和逻辑连贯。

例: I usually remember important things by making a list on my phone. I can check the list anytime, and my phone also sends me reminders, so I never forget important tasks.

× I can remember the. The outline of the homework in the school and.

✓ I can remember the outline of the homework in the school.

句子中“the.”后面多余的句号导致句子不完整，应去掉多余的句号使句子连贯。

× I can't remember the activities. Off the exact date.

✓ I can't remember the activities on the exact date.

介词“off”用错，正确表达应为“on the exact date”，表示在具体日期。

× Yes, I remember there was a time I forgot to enter. Football Trini am a member of my school football team.

✓ Yes, I remember there was a time I forgot to enter football training. I am a member of my school football team.

句子结构混乱，“Football Trini”应为“football training”，且句子应拆分为两句以表达完整意思。

× Or was that time I forgot the time and I'm late for the training and my parties are my head coach gave me some punishment.

✓ At that time, I forgot the time and was late for the training, and my coach gave me some punishment.

时态使用错误，应使用过去时“was late”，并且句子结构不清晰，需调整顺序和表达。

× I need to remember the external time and the date.

✓ I need to remember the exact time and the date.

“external time”用词错误，应为“exact time”，表示准确的时间。

× I usually remember important things. Use at least you know I will watch some important things on the list is barely on the phone, you can check it every time and.

✓ I usually remember important things by using a list on my phone; you can check it anytime.

句子结构混乱，表达不清晰，需简化并调整语序使其通顺。

× The phone will also send the message to you and you can remember it well and you will never forgot to the important things.

✓ The phone will also send messages to you, so you can remember them well and never forget important things.

“forgot to the important things”用法错误，应为“forget important things”，且“message”应为复数“messages”。