Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免语法错误和重复表达。可以简洁直接地回答问题，并用具体例子支持。

例: No, I have never been good at memorising things. For example, when I was in primary school, I often forgot my house keys and had to wait outside for my mother to let me in.

提案: 回答应更连贯，避免语法错误，使用连接词使内容更流畅，并具体描述事件。

例: Yes, last summer I forgot my passport at the hotel, which was very important because I almost missed my flight. Fortunately, I managed to get it back in time. Since then, I always double-check my belongings before leaving.

提案: 回答应更清晰，避免语法错误，使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明原因。

例: As a student, I need to remember to do my homework every day because it helps me improve my skills and get good grades, which are important for applying to a good university.

提案: 回答应更自然，避免语法错误，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并具体说明方法。

例: I like to take notes because I find it easier to remember things when I write them down and review them later.

× No, since I was a child I always forget everything, especially my own business.

✓ No, since I was a child I have always forgotten everything, especially my own business.

这里使用了表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应该用现在完成时态'have forgotten'，而不是一般现在时'forget'。

× When I was in primary school I forgot my keys, house keys a lot of time and I have to wait outside for my mother let me in.

✓ When I was in primary school I forgot my house keys many times and I had to wait outside for my mother to let me in.

'a lot of time'用法不当，应该用复数形式'many times'表示多次。'have to'应改为过去时'had to'，因为描述的是过去的事情。'for my mother let me in'缺少不定式'to'，应为'for my mother to let me in'。

× last summer vacation I forgot my passport in the hotel, which was very important because I had a flight to catch this mistake almost.

✓ Last summer vacation I forgot my passport in the hotel, which was very important because I almost missed my flight because of this mistake.

'had a flight to catch this mistake almost'语序混乱，且时态不正确。应改为'almost missed my flight because of this mistake'，表达更清晰且时态正确。

× Cost me to Mr. Flight but luckily I managed to get it back in time.

✓ It almost cost me my flight, but luckily I managed to get it back in time.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且表达不清晰。应补充主语'It'，并调整语序使句子通顺。

× since then I always double check my belongings before leaving.

✓ Since then I have always double-checked my belongings before leaving.

表示从过去持续到现在的动作，应该用现在完成时'have double-checked'，且'double check'作为动词短语应连写为'double-check'。

× I need to remember to do my homework everyday because it helps me improve my skills and make me get good grades which I can.

✓ I need to remember to do my homework every day because it helps me improve my skills and get good grades, which will help me.

'everyday'是形容词，表示日常的，应该用副词短语'every day'表示每天。'make me get'表达不自然，改为'get'即可。句尾'which I can'不完整，改为'which will help me'更合适。

× Applicant a good university.

✓ apply to a good university.

'Applicant'是名词，句中应使用动词'apply'，且搭配介词'to'，完整表达申请大学的意思。

× I would like choose take notes because I find it easier to see something that I write and then I memorized these things in my head.

✓ I would like to choose to take notes because I find it easier to see something that I write and then memorize these things in my head.

'would like'后应接不定式'to choose'，'choose'后也应接不定式'to take notes'。'memorized'应为一般现在时'memorize'，因为描述的是习惯动作。