Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“given memory”应为“a good memory”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important details. To avoid problems, I usually make a list of tasks I need to do, which helps me stay organized.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“last miles”应为“last time”，句子不够连贯。建议使用连接词使叙述更流畅，并注意时态和词汇的准确性。

例: Yes, I once missed an important exam because I stayed up too late the night before. As a result, I had to retake it the following year, which was very disappointing.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“mathematic teacher”应为“math teacher”，“mega teacher”不明确。建议使用准确词汇，简洁表达，并注意时态一致。

例: I need to remember my work schedule every day because I work part-time as a math tutor. I visit students at their homes, so being punctual is very important.

提案: 回答表达较清楚，但有拼写错误，如“invents”应为“events”，且有重复词“and and”。建议注意拼写和避免重复，同时可以丰富细节。

例: I usually use a helpful app on my phone to record important events, such as changing jobs or meeting important people. This way, I don't forget important dates.

× So in order to avoid some bad consequences I would to make a list about what I would do.

✓ So in order to avoid some bad consequences I would make a list about what I would do.

这里的错误是多余的助动词“to”，正确的用法是“would make”，不需要“to”。

× Of course, yes, last miles I had to attend a quite important exam.

✓ Of course, yes, last month I had to attend a quite important exam.

“miles”应为“month”，这是词汇错误，不属于语法错误，但影响句意。

× However, the night before I stayed up too late, so I missed it.

✓ However, the night before I stayed up too late, so I missed it.

该句无语法错误，时态使用正确。

× That means I had to attend it the next year.

✓ That means I had to attend it the next year.

该句时态使用不当，应该用将来时或过去将来时，但根据上下文，保持原句时态合理。

× Well, I have to remember the specific working time every day because I was a mathematic teacher, part time as mega teacher.

✓ Well, I have to remember the specific working time every day because I am a mathematics teacher, part time as a mega teacher.

这里时态应为现在时，且“mathematic”应为“mathematics”，“part time”前应加冠词“a”。

× So I have to go to the student's house to teach them.

✓ So I have to go to the students' houses to teach them.

“student's house”应为复数所有格“students' houses”，因为是多个学生的家。

× That means I must be punctual, yeah.

✓ That means I must be punctual, yeah.

该句无语法错误，情态动词使用正确。

× Well, I tend to use some really effective application on my phone to help me record the important invents, like when I have to change my workplace and and when I have to meet an important person.

✓ Well, I tend to use some really effective applications on my phone to help me record the important events, like when I have to change my workplace and when I have to meet an important person.

“application”应为复数“applications”，“invents”应为“events”，且去掉重复的“and”。

× Well, I tend to use some really effective application on my phone to help me record the important invents, like when I have to change my workplace and and when I have to meet an important person.

✓ Well, I tend to use some really effective applications on my phone to help me record important events, like when I have to change my workplace and when I have to meet an important person.

“record the important invents”中“the”不必要，且“invents”拼写错误，应为“events”。