Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma English prayog thik chhaina ra uttar prabhavit chhaina. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra 5 vaakya bhitra samjhauna parcha. Tapai le apang shabda haru ra asambaddha vaakya haru prayog garnu bhayeko chha, jasle kura bujhna garo parcha.

例: Yes, I am good at memorising things. Every morning, I plan my day carefully, and at night, I review what I have done. This helps me remember important tasks and stay organized.

提案: Tapai ko uttar spashta ra prabhavit chhaina. Tapai le prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha ra spashta vaakya haru banau. Linking words prayog garera uttar lai ramro banau ra 5 vaakya bhitra samjhauna parcha.

例: No, I have never forgotten anything important. I always prepare a plan at the start of the day. Also, I take notes to help me remember tasks. This method works well for me.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag spashta chha tara thap vivaran ra linking words prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le thap udaharan ra karan haru sametnu parcha jasle uttar lai prabhavit banaos.

例: In my daily life, I don't need to remember many things because I use notepads and notebooks. These tools help me keep track of important tasks and appointments easily.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo bhag spashta chha tara thap linking words ra thulo shabda prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le uttar lai thap vivaran ra udaharan haru sametnu parcha jasle uttar lai prabhavit banaos.

例: I remember important things by using my notebooks and a reminder app on my mobile phone. These tools help me stay organized and ensure I don't forget any important tasks.

× Zerilli memorized the past things.

✓ I memorized past things.

The original sentence uses 'Zerilli' which seems incorrect or irrelevant here; it should be 'I'. Also, 'past things' is vague but acceptable. The verb 'memorized' is correctly in past tense, but the subject needs correction.

× At the beginning of my day I settled my plan for the whole day and the at the end of day I memorized what tax I have.

✓ At the beginning of my day, I set my plan for the whole day, and at the end of the day, I memorized what tasks I have.

The sentence has structure issues and typos: 'settled' should be 'set' for planning, 'the at the end of day' is incorrect and should be 'and at the end of the day'. 'tax' is likely a typo for 'tasks'. Commas are needed for clarity.

× My already mentioned dad at the beginning of the day I. Prepare my plan At the end of the day, I. Memorize the whole tap that they don't and also gives some notes.

✓ As I already mentioned, at the beginning of the day, I prepare my plan. At the end of the day, I memorize the whole task that they don't and also give some notes.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and punctuation errors. 'Prepare' and 'memorize' should be in present tense if describing habitual actions. 'tap' is likely a typo for 'task'. The sentence needs proper punctuation and clearer structure.

× Well, I generally. Don't require anything extra to remember my daily life, but I use some notepads and notebooks to help them.

✓ Well, I generally don't require anything extra to remember in my daily life, but I use some notepads and notebooks to help me.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect here; it should be 'me' because the notebooks help the speaker, not 'them'. Also, the sentence has unnecessary periods disrupting flow.

× Well, I remember my important things by using my notebooks and reminder app which is install on my mobile phone.

✓ Well, I remember my important things by using my notebooks and a reminder app which is installed on my mobile phone.

The verb 'install' should be in past participle 'installed' to describe the app. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'reminder app'. The sentence structure needs slight adjustment for clarity.

× That thing support to remind the important things.

✓ That app helps to remind me of important things.

'That thing' is vague; 'app' is more precise. 'Support to remind' is incorrect; 'helps to remind' or 'helps me remember' is correct. Also, 'important things' should be preceded by 'of' when using 'remind'. The pronoun 'me' clarifies who is reminded.