Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý tưởng và sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các cụm từ tự nhiên và tránh các thành ngữ không phù hợp hoặc khó hiểu. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ ràng về khả năng ghi nhớ của mình và lý do một cách đơn giản.

例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember details, and I often forget things quickly.

提案: Bạn nên tổ chức câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về sự việc đã quên.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, one day I forgot my house key at school, which was very inconvenient because I couldn't get home easily.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh các thành ngữ không phù hợp. Hãy tập trung vào những việc cụ thể bạn cần nhớ hàng ngày.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my homework, exam dates, and important tasks at school to stay organized.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy giải thích rõ hơn về cách bạn ghi chú và tại sao nó giúp bạn nhớ.

例: To remember important things, I usually write notes or make lists because it helps me keep track of tasks and not forget them.

× Well, no, I am not good at memorizing things because as I think that memorized The thing is very hard to do and also I have a brain as a goldfish and memorizing thing is not my cup of tea.

✓ Well, no, I am not good at memorizing things because I think that memorizing things is very hard to do and also I have a brain like a goldfish and memorizing things is not my cup of tea.

The phrase 'memorized The thing' is incorrect because 'memorized' is the past participle and does not fit here. The correct form is the gerund 'memorizing' to express the action. Also, 'as I think' is unnecessary and 'like a goldfish' is the correct simile. 'Memorizing thing' should be plural 'memorizing things' for consistency.

× Well, yes, I have. A lot of things that I have forgotten and is is really important because one day I go to school and forgot my key, which is really, really important. To me to get home. So yeah, it is really important. I forget it 100 times.

✓ Well, yes, I have. A lot of things that I have forgotten are really important because one day I went to school and forgot my key, which is really, really important for me to get home. So yeah, it is really important. I have forgotten it 100 times.

The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'a lot of things'. Also, 'go' and 'forgot' should be in past tense 'went' and 'forgot' to match the past event. 'I forget it 100 times' should be 'I have forgotten it 100 times' to indicate repeated past action.

× Wow, I really need to remember all the things I need to. To learn and. How to write in my school and really need for my exam because I have a bread after goldfish and it is not my cup of tea.

✓ Wow, I really need to remember all the things I need to learn, how to write in my school, and what I really need for my exam because I have a brain like a goldfish and it is not my cup of tea.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I need to. To learn and. How to write' is incorrect structure. It should be combined into a clear list of things to remember. 'Bread after goldfish' is a mishearing or typo; the correct phrase is 'brain like a goldfish'.

× Allowed to remember important things, I often write a note, especially when I really need to write enrolled something. That kind of things help me to remember something.

✓ To remember important things, I often write notes, especially when I really need to write down something. That kind of thing helps me to remember.

'Allowed to remember' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'To remember'. 'Write enrolled something' is incorrect; it should be 'write down something'. 'That kind of things' should be singular 'That kind of thing' and 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject.