Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用更准确的词汇表达意思。例如，'I can always remember important anniversaries and my friends' birthdays, but I find it difficult to remember things like phone numbers or historical events.'

例: I am good at remembering important dates like anniversaries and birthdays, but I find it hard to memorise phone numbers or historical facts.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达混乱，建议使用简单清晰的句子，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。例如，'Yes, during my first year at college, I forgot to bring an important form to the hotel on the second day, so I lost the chance to go home.'

例: Yes, once in my first year at college, I forgot to bring an important form to the hotel, which caused me to miss going home.

提案: 回答不够连贯，建议先明确主题句，然后用连接词补充细节，表达更清晰。例如，'I need to remember my daily schedule and to-do list because they help me organise my work and balance my life.'

例: I need to remember my daily schedule and to-do list because they help me organise my tasks and maintain a balanced life.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，建议使用正确的表达方式，并具体说明方法。例如，'I often forget things, so I use calendar reminders and apps on my phone to help me remember important tasks.'

例: I often forget important things, so I use calendar reminders and mobile apps to keep track of my tasks.

× Well, it depends on what things I can.

✓ Well, it depends on what things I can remember.

句子中缺少动词，导致句子不完整。需要补充动词"remember"，使句子完整且符合语法。

× I can always remember us an important anniversary and the birthday of my friends, but I put some points mathematic phone numbers or the events of history or can be difficult for me.

✓ I can always remember an important anniversary and the birthdays of my friends, but remembering some points like mathematical phone numbers or historical events can be difficult for me.

"us"用法错误，应去掉；"birthday"应为复数"birthdays"；"put some points mathematic phone numbers or the events of history"表达混乱，改为"remembering some points like mathematical phone numbers or historical events"更通顺。

× Absolutely, back in my first year of the college I went to the tea bag lawn and I just forgotten to bring my form other second day of the hotel, so I lost it.

✓ Absolutely, back in my first year of college, I went to the tea bag lawn and I just forgot to bring my form on the second day at the hotel, so I lost it.

"forgotten"是过去分词，句中应使用一般过去时"forgot"；"the college"前不需要定冠词；"form other second day of the hotel"表达错误，改为"form on the second day at the hotel"。

× At that time if you I couldn't go home anymore.

✓ At that time, I couldn't go home anymore.

句中"if you"多余且无意义，应删除，使句子通顺。

× I guess the main thing that my schedule and To Do List I need to remember that lines up for work and with these to do next keep chase of these help me balance my life.

✓ I guess the main things are my schedule and To Do List. I need to remember what lines up for work, and keeping track of these helps me balance my life.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语动词，"that lines up for work"表达不清，改为"what lines up for work"；"keep chase of these"错误，改为"keeping track of these"。

× Uh, well it's really easy for me to forgot forgotten things, so I need some toys to help me.

✓ Uh, well it's really easy for me to forget things, so I need some tools to help me.

"forgot"和"forgotten"用法错误，应使用动词不定式"to forget"；"toys"用词不当，应为"tools"。

× For example, I always use CAN calendar reminder on my mobile devices, so I will use applications to Remember Me with things to do now.

✓ For example, I always use a calendar reminder on my mobile devices, so I use applications to remind me of things to do now.

"CAN"多余且错误，应去掉；"calendar reminder"前需加不定冠词"a"；"Remember Me with things to do now"表达错误，改为"remind me of things to do now"。