Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整的句子并准确表达意思。例如，避免使用不正确的词汇和短语，保持句子简洁且连贯。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I am afraid of forgetting important appointments or being late for school.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，明确表达自己的观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Actually, I seldom forget important things because I always keep them in mind. However, sometimes I might forget appointments or meetings if I am very busy.

提案: 回答内容较为具体，但表达不够流畅且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述方法，并注意拼写和语法的准确性。

例: In my daily life, I usually set phone alarms and write notes. For example, I put notes on the notice board so that I can see them frequently.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达混乱的问题，建议使用完整且连贯的句子，明确说明记忆重要事情的方法。

例: I usually keep important things in my mind, and I also set phone alarms to avoid forgetting them.

× Yes, I usually good at memory sees because I'm really afraid to forget something like late for school or data for song. Appointment.

✓ Yes, I am usually good at memorising things because I'm really afraid of forgetting something like being late for school or missing an appointment.

句子中缺少动词“am”，且“memory sees”应为“memorising things”，表达记忆的动作。"afraid to forget"应改为"afraid of forgetting"，符合固定搭配。"late for school or data for song. Appointment"表达不清，改为"being late for school or missing an appointment"更准确。

× Actually, I seldom forgotten something important because if I have some important things I will bear in mind, I think it's implied to forget something like, uhm, appointments or meetings.

✓ Actually, I seldom forget something important because if I have some important things I will bear them in mind. I think it's impossible to forget something like, uhm, appointments or meetings.

"seldom forgotten"中"forgotten"是过去分词，应该用一般现在时"forget"，因为句子描述的是习惯性动作。"bear in mind"后应加宾语"them"。"implied to forget"表达不正确，改为"impossible to forget"更符合语境。

× I will do two things to remember since in my daily life. Set phone alarm and write notes. For example, I will write a note and put some at the notice Bo errors so that I can see it every time.

✓ I do two things to help me remember in my daily life: set a phone alarm and write notes. For example, I write a note and put it on the notice board so that I can see it every time.

"do two things to remember since in my daily life"中"since"用法错误，应改为"to help me remember in my daily life"。"Set phone alarm"应为完整句子"set a phone alarm"。"put some at the notice Bo errors"表达混乱，应为"put it on the notice board"。

× I often there in mind when I have some important things. What's more, I also I will also set a phone alarm. A universe to avoid. Forget something important.

✓ I often keep things in mind when I have some important things. What's more, I also set a phone alarm to avoid forgetting something important.

"I often there in mind"缺少动词，应为"I often keep things in mind"。"I also I will also"重复，应简化为"I also"或"I will also"。"A universe to avoid. Forget something important."语句不通，改为"to avoid forgetting something important"。