Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不连贯，缺乏完整句子和具体内容。建议用完整句子直接回答问题，并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I often practice by repeating information during weekends.

提案: 回答内容混乱且不相关，缺乏逻辑和完整句子。建议直接回答问题并举具体例子。

例: Yes, I once forgot the time of my flight to Hawaii, which caused me a lot of stress.

提案: 回答不完整且不连贯，缺少完整句子和逻辑。建议用完整句子说明日常需要记住的具体事项。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember to bring my watch, mobile phone, and sometimes breakfast like waffles.

提案: 回答不清楚且不完整，缺乏具体方法和细节。建议用完整句子描述记忆重要事情的方法。

例: I usually write important things down in a notebook or set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

× To be honest, I had memorized. Because. Weekend.

✓ To be honest, I have memorized things over the weekend.

原句句子结构不完整，断句错误。应将分散的短句合并成完整句子，表达清晰。建议将断句合并，形成完整的陈述句。

× Heart of Gold. That record? Hawaii. My flight. Time or the number.

✓ I remember the song 'Heart of Gold', that record, Hawaii, my flight time, or the number.

原句为断断续续的短语，缺乏完整句子结构。应将相关内容合并成完整句子，表达连贯。建议将短语合并，形成完整的陈述句。

× Remember my? Waffles. Watch. Mobile phone too.

✓ I need to remember my waffles, watch, and mobile phone too.

原句缺少主语和谓语，句子不完整。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。建议补充完整句子结构。

× Is my. For important things. But it's all.

✓ It is mine. For important things, but that's all.

原句断句不当，缺乏完整句子结构。应将短句合并，形成完整句子，表达清晰。建议调整断句，补充必要成分。