Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda daha təbii və axıcı ifadələrdən istifadə edin, məsələn, 'because' sözünü tam yazın və cümlələri daha səlis birləşdirin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha qısa və konkret ifadə edin.

例: I used to be good at memorizing things when I was in school because I studied humanities. For example, I could easily remember historical events and their dates. However, nowadays, I find it harder to memorize things.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'I was assigned a task by my manager' kimi ifadə edin və əlavə olaraq əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

例: Yes, I have forgotten important things sometimes. For example, last year, I was assigned a task by my manager at work, but unfortunately, I forgot to complete it and missed the deadline. Fortunately, my manager is an easy-going person, so I didn't have any problems.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və axıcı qurun. Məsələn, 'to avoid missing my vitamins' kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələri birləşdirən sözlər əlavə edin.

例: Currently, I take some vitamins daily. Sometimes, I forget to take them on time, so I need to remember to take my vitamins at specific times to avoid missing any doses.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və axıcı edin, məsələn, 'related to my work' və 'I keep a record of my tasks in a notebook' kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha qısa və konkret ifadə edin.

例: Important things I need to remember are usually related to my work. I keep a record of my tasks in a notebook, which helps me track them and remember deadlines.

× I think I used to be good at memorizing things when I was studying at school.

✓ I think I used to be good at memorising things when I was studying at school.

The word 'memorising' is the British English spelling of the verb + -ing form, which fits the context better since the speaker uses 'memorising' elsewhere. Consistency in spelling is important.

× 'Cause my field was humanitarian subjects.

✓ Because my field was humanitarian subjects.

Starting a sentence with ''Cause' is informal and incomplete. It should be replaced with 'Because' to form a complete sentence.

× my field was humanitarian subjects.

✓ my field was humanities.

'Humanitarian subjects' is incorrect here; the correct term is 'humanities' to refer to academic disciplines related to human culture.

× but nowadays I think I'm not really good at.

✓ but nowadays I think I'm not really good at it anymore.

The sentence ends abruptly without an object after 'good at'. Adding 'it' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× Yes, sometimes I do forget things important.

✓ Yes, sometimes I do forget important things.

The adjective 'important' should come before the noun 'things' in English.

× For example last year I assigned the task by my manager at work,

✓ For example, last year I was assigned a task by my manager at work,

The sentence requires passive voice in past tense 'was assigned' because the subject received the action.

× but unfortunately I've forgotten to do it and and I missed the deadline.

✓ but unfortunately I forgot to do it and missed the deadline.

Using simple past 'forgot' is more appropriate here than present perfect 'have forgotten' because the time is specified (last year). Also, 'and' is repeated twice by mistake.

× But thanks, my manager was easy going person so I don't have any problem.

✓ But thanks to my manager, who was an easy-going person, I didn't have any problems.

'Easy going' should be hyphenated as 'easy-going' when used as an adjective. Also, 'thanks to' is the correct phrase, and 'didn't have any problems' matches past tense context.

× Currently I'm taking some vitamins.

✓ Currently, I'm taking some vitamins.

Adding a comma after 'Currently' improves sentence clarity.

× Sometimes I forget to take them on time, so in my daily life I really need to remember to take my vitamins at a certain time.

✓ Sometimes I forget to take them on time, so in my daily life, I really need to remember to take my vitamins at a certain time.

Adding commas after introductory phrases improves readability.

× In order to not skip the amount of. Vitamins for my daily life.

✓ In order not to skip the amount of vitamins I need daily.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a complete and clear sentence.

× Important things that I have to do is related with my work and my tasks.

✓ Important things that I have to do are related to my work and my tasks.

The verb should be plural 'are' to agree with plural subject 'things'. Also, 'related to' is the correct preposition, not 'related with'.

× Important things that I have to do is related with my work and my tasks.

✓ Important things that I have to do are related to my work and my tasks.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'.

× So I have a notebook where I keep a record of my tasks so I can follow them and.

✓ So I have a notebook where I keep a record of my tasks so I can follow them.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× It also helps me to remember them before the deadlines.

✓ It also helps me remember them before the deadlines.

The infinitive 'to remember' can be simplified to 'remember' after 'helps me' for smoother English.