Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perlu memperbaiki struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kalimat lengkap dan hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu. Misalnya, mulai dengan kalimat topik yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan, lalu berikan detail pendukung dengan kata penghubung yang tepat.

例: Sometimes I'm quite good at memorising things, but it depends on what I need to remember. For example, I can easily recall important dates, but I often forget small details.

提案: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak lengkap. Perlu menggunakan kalimat yang lengkap dan menghubungkan ide dengan kata penghubung agar lebih koheren. Jelaskan pengalaman dengan detail spesifik untuk memperkaya jawaban.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, and it was very annoying because I had to deal with the consequences.

提案: Jawaban tidak jelas dan tidak terstruktur. Perlu menjawab langsung dengan kalimat yang lengkap dan memberikan contoh spesifik. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih logis dan mudah dipahami.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments and tasks. Sometimes, I use my phone or make notes to help me remember.

提案: Jawaban kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur. Perlu menjelaskan metode mengingat dengan kalimat lengkap dan menggunakan kata penghubung agar jawaban lebih koheren dan efektif.

例: I usually use reminder applications on my phone to remember important things. Sometimes, I also write notes and place them where I can easily see them.

× Add memorizing.

✓ And memorizing.

The student likely intended to say 'And memorizing' to connect the previous sentence. 'Add' is incorrect here; 'And' is the correct conjunction to link ideas.

× Something, but sometimes I.

✓ Sometimes I do.

The sentence fragment 'Something, but sometimes I.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to 'Sometimes I do.' to make sense in context.

× Get easy to forget it depends on what the memorize I. Have to recall.

✓ I get easy to forget; it depends on what I have to memorize and recall.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing words. Correct word order and inclusion of necessary words improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I've. Experient forgotten.

✓ Yes, I've experienced forgetting.

The word 'Experient' is incorrect; the correct past participle is 'experienced'. Also, 'forgotten' should be connected properly to express the experience.

× Something important is. Very. Annoying an I have to.

✓ Forgetting something important is very annoying, and I have to remember it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Combining fragments into a complete sentence improves understanding and grammatical correctness.

× Sometimes I usually not in my phone or. Up.

✓ Sometimes I usually do not use my phone or apps.

The phrase 'not in my phone or. Up.' is incorrect. The correct preposition and word choice is 'use my phone or apps' to express the intended meaning.

× Sometimes I just. Anne. Make a knot in the pepper and I give in.

✓ Sometimes I just make a knot in the paper and give it in.

The sentence contains unclear words and fragments. 'Anne' is likely a mishearing of 'and'. 'Pepper' should be 'paper'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× In the fridge are. Applied.

✓ I put it in the fridge as a reminder.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction provides a complete sentence that fits the context.

× Aye. Make a some. Knots in the reminder. Application.

✓ I make some knots in the reminder application.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unnecessary words. The correction forms a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× At my phone sometimes I just keep writing an. Came in. Place I. Can see.

✓ On my phone, sometimes I just keep writing a note in a place I can see.

The preposition 'At' is incorrect; 'On' is appropriate for devices. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.