Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ не ясен и содержит много грамматических ошибок. Постарайтесь давать чёткий и связный ответ, используя простые предложения и правильную структуру. Например, начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте объяснение или пример.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising important things because I always try to focus on what matters most. For example, I remember important dates and events clearly.

提案: Ваш ответ содержит много пауз и грамматических ошибок, что затрудняет понимание. Старайтесь строить предложения правильно и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. Last summer, I forgot my sister's birthday, which was a very significant moment for me.

提案: Ответ не структурирован и содержит ошибки. Рекомендуется начать с главной идеи, затем добавить детали, используя связующие слова для плавности речи.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine. For example, I plan what I will do each day, such as exercising or teaching.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит много ошибок. Постарайтесь использовать полные предложения и объяснять, как именно вы запоминаете важные вещи.

例: I remember important things by associating them with special dates, like anniversaries or my children's birthdays.

× I'm never for good to the important.

✓ I'm never good at remembering important things.

The phrase 'never for good to the important' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'good' in this context is 'at', and the phrase should be 'good at remembering important things' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Meanings or important things for me and I think.

✓ Important meanings or things matter to me, I think.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and clarity. Rearranging the words to form a complete sentence with subject and verb improves understanding.

× Oh, good memories.

✓ Oh, I have a good memory.

The original phrase is a fragment and does not form a complete sentence. Adding a subject and verb makes it a complete sentence.

× And it's important. What? Right. Significant.

✓ And it's important, right? Significant things matter.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a coherent sentence improves clarity.

× I'm uh, that happens last summer when I.

✓ Uh, that happened last summer when I...

The verb 'happens' is present tense but the sentence refers to a past event, so it should be 'happened'.

× For go to the birthday, my sister and when I.

✓ I forgot to go to my sister's birthday, and when I...

The phrase 'For go' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'forgot to go'. Also, possessive form 'my sister's birthday' is needed.

× Forget this.

✓ I forgot this.

The verb 'forget' should be in past tense 'forgot' to match the past event context.

× And. I think it's very significant memory.

✓ And I think it's a very significant memory.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the article 'a' before 'very significant memory'.

× Of course it's my routine in day and I think I'm every day remember what I'm will do it and what I will not do.

✓ Of course, it's my daily routine and I think every day I remember what I will do and what I will not do.

The phrase 'routine in day' is incorrect; it should be 'daily routine'. Also, 'I'm every day remember' is incorrect; it should be 'I remember every day'. The phrase 'what I'm will do it' is incorrect; it should be 'what I will do'.

× And I think about it.

✓ And I think about it.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× It's my Dell daily routine and I'm about sport or teaching or a.

✓ It's my daily routine and I'm involved in sports or teaching or something similar.

The phrase 'Dell daily routine' is incorrect; 'daily routine' is correct. The phrase 'I'm about sport or teaching or a' is incomplete and unclear; it should be clarified as 'I'm involved in sports or teaching or something similar'.

× Important things For me it's like celebrating's or dates.

✓ Important things for me are celebrations or dates.

The phrase 'celebrating's' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'celebrations'. Also, 'Important things For me it's' should be 'Important things for me are' to agree in number.

× Or marrying date or a Thursday my kids or like this and I think important things.

✓ Or marriage dates or my kids' birthdays or things like this, and I think these are important things.

'Marrying date' should be 'marriage dates' (plural). 'A Thursday my kids' is unclear; likely intended 'my kids' birthdays'. Also, 'like this' should be 'things like this'. The sentence needs to agree in number and clarity.

× It's not for kids never.

✓ It's never unimportant for kids.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Rephrasing to 'It's never unimportant for kids' conveys the intended meaning more clearly.