Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizni yanada aniq va tabiiy qilish uchun, grammatikani yaxshilang va takrorlanishlardan qoching. Masalan, "In my point of view" o'rniga "In my opinion" yoki "I think" deb boshlang. Shuningdek, fikrlaringizni to'liq va mantiqiy tarzda ifoda eting.

例: I think I am good at memorising things because I can easily remember information from scientific and fiction books that I read.

提案: Javobingizni aniq va tushunarli qilish uchun, gaplaringizni to'liq va mantiqiy shaklda ifoda eting. Shuningdek, misollar keltiring va bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.

例: Yes, I often forget important things like people's birthdays and special phone numbers, especially when I meet new people.

提案: Javobingizni yaxshilash uchun, gaplaringizni to'liq va aniq qilib tuzing. Mavzuga mos so'zlarni ishlating va bog'lovchi so'zlar yordamida fikrlaringizni bog'lang.

例: Most of the time, I need to remember to take my vitamins and look after my baby, as her schedule changes sometimes.

提案: Javobingizni tushunarli va mantiqiy qilish uchun, gaplaringizni to'liq va aniq ifoda eting. Qanday usullarni qo'llashingizni aniq tushuntiring.

例: Firstly, I write important things down in a notebook, and after reviewing them several times, I can remember them easily.

× That's why my my memory is a good.

✓ That's why my memory is good.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the uncountable noun 'memory'. In English, 'memory' in this context is uncountable and does not require an article. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× That's why, uh, when I learned some information you information or read scientific book or fiction book, My memory is.

✓ That's why, when I learn some information or read a scientific or fiction book, my memory works well.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb tenses and missing articles. 'Learned' should be 'learn' to match the present tense context. 'You information' is incorrect and removed. 'Scientific book' and 'fiction book' need the article 'a' and should be connected properly. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course it mostly time I forgot person's birthday.

✓ Yes, of course, most of the time I forget a person's birthday.

The phrase 'mostly time' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the time'. 'Forgot' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'forget' (present tense) is appropriate. Also, 'person's birthday' needs the article 'a' before 'person's'.

× At all so a person's special numbers.

✓ Also, I forget a person's special numbers.

'At all so' is incorrect and replaced with 'Also'. The sentence lacked a verb and was incomplete. Adding 'I forget' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Uh, if I have. Meet some and you.

✓ Uh, if I meet someone, I remember.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper structure and meaning.

× Mostly time I need to remember my. My trucks and vitamins additionally my I have a babies and also she muscle time it some different.

✓ Most of the time, I need to remember my tasks and vitamins. Additionally, I have babies, and sometimes it is different.

'Mostly time' should be 'Most of the time'. 'My trucks' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'my tasks'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'She muscle time it some different' is unclear and corrected to 'sometimes it is different' to convey intended meaning.

× Firstly, I arrived and not when I. Lauren this sings. After that I can remember. Easy.

✓ Firstly, I write notes when I learn these things. After that, I can remember easily.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain incorrect words ('arrived' instead of 'write', 'Lauren' instead of 'learn', 'sings' instead of 'things'). The corrected sentence uses proper vocabulary and sentence structure to convey the intended meaning clearly.