Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I was very good at memorising things when I was a child because I often played memory games. However, as I grew older, I found it more difficult to remember things.

提案: 回答简洁但缺少细节和连接词。建议补充具体例子，并使用连接词使回答更自然。

例: Actually, I have never forgotten anything important because I always set alarms to remind me of important tasks or appointments.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，缺少具体内容和连贯性。建议明确列举需要记住的具体事项，并使用完整句子。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember important things such as appointments, deadlines, and meetings.

提案: 回答中断且不连贯，缺少细节。建议使用完整句子并补充更多记忆方法。

例: I usually set alarms on my phone to remind me of important appointments and meetings. Sometimes, I also write notes to help me remember.

× I was really good at memorizing memorizing things when I was a child.

✓ I was really good at memorizing things when I was a child.

句子中“memorizing”重复出现，属于多余重复，应删除一个以保持句子简洁。

× Because I used to play memory. Games a lot however as I grew up I. Found it hard to. And remembered it.

✓ Because I used to play memory games a lot. However, as I grew up, I found it hard to remember things.

原句断句不当，导致语义不连贯。应将断句调整，连接词使用恰当，且“remembered it”应改为“remember things”以表达完整意思。

× If I have some important things I will set alarm to remind me.

✓ If I have some important things, I will set an alarm to remind me.

条件句中缺少逗号分隔，且“set alarm”缺少冠词“an”，应为“set an alarm”。

× I need to remember some important things like. Uhm, example or some meetings?

✓ I need to remember some important things like, um, examples or some meetings.

“example”应为复数形式“examples”，且句中“like”后应直接跟例子，句号使用不当，应改为逗号。

× I usually set an alarm. To remind me some important things like. Appointment meeting and so.

✓ I usually set an alarm to remind me of some important things like appointments, meetings, and so on.

“remind me some important things”缺少介词“of”，且“appointment meeting”应分开为“appointments, meetings”，句子断句不当，应连贯表达。