Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng liên từ để nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về cách bạn sử dụng kỹ thuật ghi nhớ và ví dụ cụ thể về việc nhớ tên hoặc số.

例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For instance, I often remember people's faces and names easily. Moreover, I use techniques like mnemonics to help me memorise important information. Playing memory games also helps me improve this skill.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về cảm xúc và hành động của bạn khi quên điều quan trọng.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday, which made me feel terrible. Since we are very close, I apologized sincerely and tried to make it up to her by planning a special celebration.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề, sau đó dùng liên từ để thêm chi tiết cụ thể và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về các cam kết xã hội và gia đình bạn cần nhớ và lý do tại sao.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember social and family commitments such as birthdays and anniversaries. It is also important for me to balance my time between work and personal life to maintain strong relationships.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về cách bạn sử dụng công nghệ để ghi nhớ việc quan trọng.

例: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For example, I always set reminders and alarms on my smartphone. Additionally, I use apps like To Do List and calendar to organise my tasks efficiently.

× I would I say yes.

✓ I would say yes.

The sentence contains a redundant 'I' which disrupts the sentence structure. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence to a proper structure.

× I can easily remember number and days.

✓ I can easily remember numbers and days.

The word 'number' should be plural 'numbers' to match the plural 'days' and to correctly express multiple items being remembered.

× And I often Rico pupils face and names without much effort.

✓ And I often recall people's faces and names without much effort.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words ('Rico pupils face'). Replacing with 'recall people's faces' corrects the meaning and structure.

× And I also used technique like mnemonic to help me memorize thing.

✓ And I also use techniques like mnemonics to help me memorize things.

'Technique' and 'thing' should be plural ('techniques', 'things') to match the context of multiple methods and items. Also, 'used' should be present tense 'use' to match the present context.

× And finally I play. I enjoy playing game.

✓ And finally, I enjoy playing games.

The sentence is fragmented and 'game' should be plural 'games' to express general enjoyment of playing games.

× I once forgot my best friend birthday, but I in I felt absolutely terrible about it.

✓ I once forgot my best friend's birthday, and I felt absolutely terrible about it.

The phrase 'best friend birthday' needs possessive form 'best friend's birthday'. Also, 'but I in I felt' is incorrect; replacing with 'and I felt' corrects the sentence and maintains past tense consistency.

× We are very close an eye so I made I made approach.

✓ We are very close, so I made an approach.

'An eye' is incorrect here; it should be 'an approach'. Also, the repeated 'I made' is redundant and removed for clarity.

× I hope to make it up for her.

✓ I hope to make it up to her.

The correct preposition after 'make it up' is 'to', not 'for'.

× I need to remember social, an family commitment such as birthdays, anniversary is necessary for me to check in with gloves on.

✓ I need to remember social and family commitments such as birthdays and anniversaries; it is necessary for me to check in with loved ones.

'Commitment' should be plural 'commitments' to match multiple items. 'Anniversary' should be plural 'anniversaries'. 'An' is incorrect before 'family'. 'Gloves on' is likely a mishearing or typo; replaced with 'loved ones' for meaning.

× An balance my time between work and personal life to maintain strong relationship.

✓ And balance my time between work and personal life to maintain strong relationships.

'An' should be 'And'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to indicate multiple relationships.

× I rely heavily on technology to remember important things like smartphone is independent label and I always and I always.

✓ I rely heavily on technology to remember important things like smartphones, and I always...

The sentence is incomplete and contains unclear phrases ('smartphone is independent label'). Corrected to 'smartphones' plural and removed unclear phrase; sentence needs completion.

× Set a reminder in alarm for task and use apps like To Do List or calendar too.

✓ I set reminders and alarms for tasks and use apps like To Do List or calendar too.

The sentence lacks subject and proper verb forms. Adding 'I' and pluralizing 'reminder' and 'task' improves clarity and correctness.