Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, cũng như lặp từ không cần thiết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp lại từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have a good memory. I can easily remember numbers and states, and I often recall people's faces and names without much effort. I also use technology, like apps, to help me remember important information.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot my best friend Ann's birthday, and I felt terrible about it. I made sure to apologize to her sincerely.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

例: In my daily life, I need to remember social and family commitments, such as my daughter's birthday and anniversaries. I also try to balance my time between work and personal life to maintain strong relationships.

提案: Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và lỗi phát âm. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For instance, I use my smartphone and a calendar app to remind me of tasks and appointments throughout the day.

× I can easily remember number and state and I often recall peoples faces and names without much effort.

✓ I can easily remember numbers and states and I often recall people's faces and names without much effort.

The word 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple items. 'State' should be plural 'states' for the same reason. 'Peoples' is incorrect; the possessive form 'people's' is needed to indicate faces belonging to people.

× I feel I always use technology like manipulate you help me.

✓ I feel I always use technology like a manipulator to help me.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns. 'Manipulate you help me' is incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'a manipulator to help me' to clarify the meaning.

× I, uh, I forgotten something important before.

✓ I, uh, have forgotten something important before.

The verb 'forgotten' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense. Without 'have', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Ann is my best friend. Birthdays. And now I feel absolutely terrible about it. About it then. I assure to apologize for her.

✓ Ann is my best friend. I forgot her birthday, and now I feel absolutely terrible about it. I assure you I will apologize to her.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Birthdays.' is incomplete. 'About it then.' is unnecessary. 'I assure to apologize for her.' is incorrect; it should be 'I assure you I will apologize to her.' for clarity and correct structure.

× Yes, I need to remember social and family commitments such as daughter is Anna anniversaries isn't pouring in for me to check it with love, fondness, an imbalance in my time between work and personal life and personalized to Winston. Strong relationship.

✓ Yes, I need to remember social and family commitments such as my daughter Anna's anniversaries. It's important for me to check them with love and fondness, balance my time between work and personal life, and maintain strong relationships.

The original sentence is confusing and contains singular/plural errors and unclear phrases. 'daughter is Anna anniversaries isn't pouring in' is incorrect. It should be 'my daughter Anna's anniversaries'. The rest is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For instantly by smartphone bees in it pencil.

✓ I rely heavily on technology to remember important things. For instance, by using my smartphone and a pencil.

'For instantly' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'For instance'. 'Bees in it pencil' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'using my smartphone and a pencil' for clarity.

× And I use uh some alliance calendar internally to remind task and schedule 2 day throughout.

✓ And I use an online calendar internally to remind me of tasks and schedule my day throughout.

'Alliance calendar' is likely 'online calendar'. 'Remind task' should be 'remind me of tasks'. 'Schedule 2 day throughout' is unclear; corrected to 'schedule my day throughout' for clarity and correct pronoun use.