Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some errors and redundancies. Try to be more precise and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, explain briefly why you find memorising difficult and what methods you use.

例: I'm not very good at memorising things, especially new vocabulary. Therefore, I often try different methods, such as flashcards or repetition, to help me remember. However, it usually takes me a few weeks to memorise new words properly because I need to review them several times.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and provide more details to make your response coherent. Use linking words to explain the situation and its consequences.

例: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, I once forgot about a date with a friend, which let her down and made her very disappointed with my behaviour.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some unclear phrases like 'important coax'. Try to use precise vocabulary and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, provide more specific examples.

例: In my daily life, especially at work, I need to remember several important codes that have specific meanings. Additionally, I have to recall phone numbers of clients because I often contact them. Remembering these details helps me stay organised and efficient.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to organise your ideas logically and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your methods clearly.

例: I usually write important tasks on a memo or in my phone and set alarms to remind me. For example, I set reminders for things I need to do after lunch or before finishing work to ensure I don't forget them.

× No, I'm not very good at memorizing face because sometimes I have to find different methods to help me memorize new Rambo new words and phrases.

✓ No, I'm not very good at memorizing faces because sometimes I have to find different methods to help me memorize new words and phrases.

The word 'face' is incorrectly used here; it should be plural 'faces' if referring to multiple faces. Also, 'Rambo' seems to be an error or irrelevant word and has been removed for clarity. The sentence requires correct adjective or noun usage to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, sometimes I. I have a date but I totally forgot and I just. Let my friend down and she was very disappointed about my my. My behavior and.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have a date but I totally forget and I just let my friend down, and she was very disappointed with my behaviour.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incomplete thoughts. The verb tense 'forgot' is changed to 'forget' to match the present tense context implied by 'sometimes'. Also, repeated words and incomplete phrases are corrected to form a coherent sentence. 'Disappointed about' is corrected to 'disappointed with' for proper preposition use.

× Well, there are quite a few things I need to remember in my daily life, especially at work. For instance, I have to recall important coax that represents specific meanings as well as several phone numbers because I often need to contact clients.

✓ Well, there are quite a few things I need to remember in my daily life, especially at work. For instance, I have to recall important codes that represent specific meanings as well as several phone numbers because I often need to contact clients.

The word 'coax' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'codes'. This is a quantifier issue where the wrong noun is used, affecting the meaning of the sentence. Correcting the noun clarifies the intended message.

× Remember those details helps me stay organized.

✓ Remembering those details helps me stay organised.

The verb 'Remember' should be in the gerund form 'Remembering' to function as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'organized' is spelled 'organised' in British English. This correction addresses the incorrect verb form and aligns with British English spelling conventions.

× I usually write down on a memo or I will write on my phone and set an alarm to remember to Remember Me when I have to do this, what I have to do after lunch, or before our lunch or before I finish the work and after work today.

✓ I usually write things down on a memo or on my phone and set an alarm to remind me what I have to do after lunch, before lunch, before I finish work, and after work today.

The phrase 'write down on a memo' is incomplete; it should be 'write things down on a memo'. The phrase 'remember to Remember Me' is incorrect; it should be 'set an alarm to remind me'. Also, 'our lunch' is changed to 'lunch' for clarity. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.