Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，“retire information”应为“retain information”。建议加强语法基础，使用更准确的词汇表达，同时注意句子结构的完整性。

例: Yes, I would say I'm good at memorising things. For example, when I started preparing for exams, I used techniques like repetition and association, which helped me retain information more efficiently.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和用词错误，如“make nose”应为“make notes”，“without my any problem”表达不清。建议加强语法练习，注意时态和冠词的使用，避免表达模糊。

例: Actually, no. I have never forgotten anything really important. I am quite good at remembering things because I make notes or set reminders on my phone. In my 20 years of life, I have been able to remember important dates and appointments without any problem.

提案: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议多练习句子结构，使用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免使用不完整或错误的短语。

例: Well, I need to remember my AirPods because they are very small and easy to lose. Also, I need to remember to bring my phone when I take the subway.

提案: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“set remain reminder”应为“set reminders”，“this made them that works well”表达不清晰。建议注意句子连贯性和准确用词。

例: Well, personally, I write important things down on paper because it helps me remember better. Sometimes, I also set reminders on my phone so I can easily see them and avoid forgetting. This method works well for me because it keeps the information visible and organized.

× Yes, I would say I'm good at memory things and for example when I started more exam I use techniques like repetition and association which helped me really retire information or more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I would say I'm good at memorising things and, for example, when I started more exams I use techniques like repetition and association which helped me really retrieve information more efficiently.

这里“memory things”应改为“memorising things”，因为动词短语“good at”后面应接动名词形式。单词“retire”应为“retrieve”，意思是“检索”。“more exam”应为“more exams”，复数形式。

× Yes, I would say I'm good at memory things and for example when I started more exam I use techniques like repetition and association which helped me really retire information or more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I would say I'm good at memorising things and, for example, when I started more exams I use techniques like repetition and association which helped me really retrieve information more efficiently.

“exam”应使用复数形式“exams”，因为表示多个考试。

× Yes, I would say I'm good at memory things and for example when I started more exam I use techniques like repetition and association which helped me really retire information or more efficiently.

✓ Yes, I would say I'm good at memorising things and, for example, when I started more exams I use techniques like repetition and association which helped me really retrieve information more efficiently.

“helped me really retire”中“retire”应为过去分词“retrieve”，表示“检索”。

× Actually no, I have never forgotten anything like really important.

✓ Actually no, I have never forgotten anything really important.

“like”在此句中用法不当，应去掉，直接用“anything really important”表达“任何真正重要的东西”。

× I am quite good at remembering things because I would make nose or set reminders on my phone for example.

✓ I am quite good at remembering things because I make notes or set reminders on my phone, for example.

“make nose”应为“make notes”，“nose”是“鼻子”，应为“notes”笔记。

× In my 20 years of life I can record any important date and the appointment without my any problem.

✓ In my 20 years of life I can record any important date and appointment without any problem.

“the appointment”前不应加定冠词“the”，且“any problem”前不应加“my”。

× In my 20 years of life I can record any important date and the appointment without my any problem.

✓ In my 20 years of life I can record any important date and appointment without any problem.

“the appointment”中的“the”不合适，应去掉。

× In my 20 years of life I can record any important date and the appointment without my any problem.

✓ In my 20 years of life I can record any important date and appointment without any problem.

“my any problem”词序错误，应为“any problem”。

× Well, it must be my Airpods because it is still tiny I. I'm always didn't see it so I get out and but at least important things for me.

✓ Well, it must be my AirPods because they are still tiny. I always don't see them, so I take them out, but they are at least important things for me.

句子结构混乱，“Airpods”应为复数“AirPods”，代词应与之对应。动词时态和词序错误，需调整使句子通顺。

× Well, it must be my Airpods because it is still tiny I. I'm always didn't see it so I get out and but at least important things for me.

✓ Well, it must be my AirPods because they are still tiny. I always don't see them, so I take them out, but they are at least important things for me.

“it”应改为“they”，因为AirPods是复数。

× I'm always didn't see it so I get out and but at least important things for me.

✓ I always don't see it, so I take it out, but it is at least an important thing for me.

“I'm always didn't see it”时态混乱，应使用一般现在时“I always don't see it”。

× I need to play my form on the subway, so I'm need the my.

✓ I need to play my phone on the subway, so I need it.

“play my form”应为“play my phone”，“I'm need the my”语法错误，应为“I need it”。

× I need to play my form on the subway, so I'm need the my.

✓ I need to play my phone on the subway, so I need it.

“play my form on the subway”中“form”应为“phone”，且“on the subway”用法正确。

× Well personally I really write important things down on paper because it helps me remember better and sometimes I also set remain reminder on my phone so I can easily see them and avoid forgetting and this made them that works well for me because they keep the information visible and organize it.

✓ Well, personally I really write important things down on paper because it helps me remember better, and sometimes I also set reminders on my phone so I can easily see them and avoid forgetting. This method works well for me because it keeps the information visible and organized.

“set remain reminder”应为“set reminders”，“this made them that works well”语法错误，应改为“This method works well”。

× sometimes I also set remain reminder on my phone so I can easily see them and avoid forgetting and this made them that works well for me because they keep the information visible and organize it.

✓ sometimes I also set reminders on my phone so I can easily see them and avoid forgetting. This method works well for me because it keeps the information visible and organized.

“remain reminder”用词错误，应为“reminders”，表示多个提醒。