Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然流畅，表达有些重复和不连贯。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免多余的词汇，并且使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I don't have a favorite machine at home because my family prefers to do tasks manually. We believe some jobs are better done by hand since machines sometimes can't meet our specific needs.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的语法结构，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I think washing and sweeping machines are important depending on the family's situation. For example, if both parents work, these machines help keep the house clean more easily.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达错误，内容不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用正确的句子结构，并具体说明为什么要阅读说明书。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine to understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构较复杂且有些重复。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, reading instructions is very important because it helps us use machines safely, especially since most people are not engineers.

× If the family have has a has a housewoman, maybe it's become absolutely easy.

✓ If the family has a housewoman, maybe it becomes absolutely easy.

这里的主语是单数名词family，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式has。原句中出现了重复和错误的动词形式，需简化为单一正确形式。

× But if the family is a 2 carrier family with both parents working, maybe it's difficult to clean up their home.

✓ But if the family is a two-carrier family with both parents working, maybe it's difficult to clean up their home.

数字2应写为two，且two-carrier作为复合形容词修饰family，需用连字符连接。

× So I need to restrictions to learn more information about it and I will, I will just let her lead me to do the next step.

✓ So I need to read the instructions to learn more information about it, and I will just let her lead me to do the next step.

原句中“need to restrictions”搭配错误，应为“need to read the instructions”，即“需要阅读说明书”。

× So I need to restrictions to learn more information about it and I will, I will just let her lead me to do the next step.

✓ So I need to read the instructions to learn more information about it, and I will just let it lead me to do the next step.

机器是无生命物体，代词应使用it而非her。

× Sure, there's no doubt that the importance of instructions because as we all know, if we want to make sure our life safe, we must read the instructions before we use it because not everybody is an engineer, so we must make sure the machine is safe.

✓ Sure, there's no doubt about the importance of instructions because, as we all know, if we want to make sure our life is safe, we must read the instructions before we use them because not everybody is an engineer, so we must make sure the machine is safe.

instructions是复数，代词应使用them而非it；life safe应为life is safe，缺少系动词。