Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by correcting minor grammar errors and making the sentences more natural. For example, say "It really makes my daily routine much easier" instead of "me daily routine". Also, try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly.

例: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Instead of washing clothes by hand, I can use the machine to do it quickly, so I can focus on other important tasks. It really makes my daily routine much easier.

提案: Your answer is relevant and includes an example, but there are some word choice errors such as "household courses" instead of "household chores". Also, try to use more linking words like "because" or "therefore" to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I totally agree that washing machines and sweeping machines are essential, especially for workers who have busy schedules. For example, many people work during the day and don't have time to do household chores, so these machines can save a lot of time and effort.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear phrases and grammar mistakes, such as "chicken gadget" and "chocolate device" which seem incorrect. Also, "correctly and safety" should be "correctly and safely". Try to use precise vocabulary and correct grammar to make your answer clearer.

例: Yes, I usually read the instructions carefully before using any machine because I'm not very confident with electrical appliances. For example, when I use a new kitchen gadget or a chocolate maker, reading the instructions helps me understand how to use it correctly and safely.

提案: Your answer shows understanding but has grammar and clarity issues. For example, "avoid that broke the machine" is incorrect. You can say "avoid breaking the machine". Also, avoid repeating "safely" twice. Try to make your sentences clearer and more grammatically correct.

例: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because they help us understand how to use the machine safely and correctly, which can prevent damage and accidents.

× It really makes me daily routine much easier.

✓ It really makes my daily routine much easier.

The possessive adjective 'my' should be used instead of 'me' to correctly modify 'daily routine'. Using 'me' here is incorrect because 'daily routine' belongs to the speaker.

× many people work during the day and don't have time to do household courses, so these machines can save a lot of time and effort.

✓ many people work during the day and don't have time to do household chores, so these machines can save a lot of time and effort.

The word 'courses' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'chores', which means household tasks. This is a vocabulary error related to word choice rather than grammar, but it affects clarity.

× I'm not very confident with electrical appliance.

✓ I'm not very confident with electrical appliances.

The noun 'appliance' should be plural 'appliances' to match the general reference. Also, 'confident with' is acceptable but 'confident about' or 'confident using' might be better; however, the main issue is singular/plural mismatch.

× when I use a new chicken gadget or in a chocolate device, reading the instructions helps me understand how to use it and correctly and safety.

✓ when I use a new kitchen gadget or a chocolate device, reading the instructions helps me understand how to use it correctly and safely.

'Chicken gadget' is a typo for 'kitchen gadget'. Also, 'and correctly and safety' is incorrect; the correct adverbs are 'correctly and safely'. The preposition 'in' before 'a chocolate device' is unnecessary and removed.

× the instructions can make sure that we understand how to use it safely and correctly so as to avoid that broke the machine and more safely.

✓ the instructions can ensure that we understand how to use it safely and correctly so as to avoid breaking the machine and to be safer.

'Make sure' is better replaced by 'ensure' for formal correctness. 'Avoid that broke the machine' is incorrect; the gerund 'breaking' should be used after 'avoid'. 'And more safely' is unclear and corrected to 'and to be safer' for clarity.