Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，且有语法错误，如“tired to do it”不符合英语表达习惯。建议多练习使用正确的句型和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because the weather in Jiangsu is very hot these days. Without it, I would feel uncomfortable and tired, especially when doing housework.

提案: 回答内容较好，但句子结构重复，缺少连接词使表达显得单调。建议使用连接词如“because”、“therefore”来使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because people are busy with work and children spend much time at school. Therefore, we don't have enough time to do housework ourselves.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“so I will”后面缺少内容。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，避免表达模糊。

例: To be honest, I don't usually read instructions because modern machines are easy to use. I can understand their functions by myself without much difficulty.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，如“vacations”应为“situations”，“1st”应避免数字缩写。建议使用正确词汇和完整句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions, especially in important situations or when using a machine for the first time. This helps us understand how to use it properly.

× I will get very hot and tired to do it.

✓ I will get very hot and tired of doing it.

这里的表达应使用动词+ing形式，表示对某事感到厌倦或疲惫，正确搭配是 'tired of doing something'，而不是 'tired to do'。

× we can just see these functions by ourselves.

✓ we can just see these functions ourselves.

这里的 'by ourselves' 用法不当，正确表达应为 'ourselves'，表示我们自己能看懂这些功能。

× So reading.

✓ So reading them is important.

句子不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致表达不清晰。应补充完整，使句子结构完整。