Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“more cheaper”应为“cheaper”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

例: My favorite machine at home is the coffee maker. I use it every morning to brew fresh coffee, which is cheaper and more convenient than buying coffee outside.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误（swapping应为sweeping），语法结构不够准确。建议注意单复数和动词形式，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they save time and effort. For instance, when I'm tired, I can quickly finish housework using these machines.

提案: 回答逻辑不清，表达不自然，且有语法错误。建议明确表达阅读说明书的时间和原因，避免重复和错误。

例: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because some functions are complex, and reading the manual helps me avoid mistakes or accidents.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇（we we），语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important, especially for complex machines, because ignoring them can lead to damage or malfunction.

× Well, my favorite machine in my home is coffee machine.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is the coffee machine.

此处缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指家中的咖啡机，英语中单数可数名词前需要加冠词。

× I find that it is more cheaper than buying outside.

✓ I find that it is cheaper than buying outside.

“more cheaper”是冗余表达，比较级“cheaper”本身已包含比较含义，不需要加“more”。

× I think washing machines and swapping machines is a very important in our daily life because they help save a lot of time and effort.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our daily life because they help save a lot of time and effort.

主语是复数“washing machines and sweeping machines”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，且“a very important”中“important”是形容词，前面不应加不定冠词“a”。另外，“swapping machines”应为“sweeping machines”。

× I think that is important to read instruction after I use it because some functions are so complex that I need to to avoid eye damage or make mistake on it.

✓ I think that it is important to read the instructions before I use it because some functions are so complex that I need to avoid eye damage or making mistakes with it.

“read instruction”应为“read the instructions”，加定冠词且用复数；“after I use it”应为“before I use it”符合逻辑；“to to avoid”重复，应删去一个“to”；“make mistake on it”表达不正确，应为“making mistakes with it”。

× Well, as I said, I think that is very important to read the instruction, especially some complex machines.

✓ Well, as I said, I think that it is very important to read the instructions, especially for some complex machines.

“read the instruction”应为复数“instructions”，且“especially some complex machines”前应加介词“for”表示针对对象。

× I think if we we don't care about these instructions that we may be destroying and damage these machines.

✓ I think if we don't care about these instructions, we may destroy and damage these machines.

句中“we we”重复，应删去一个；“that”连接词用法不当，应去掉；“may be destroying and damage”时态和结构不一致，应改为“may destroy and damage”。