Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“don't like to watching”应为“like to watch”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅自然。

例: My favourite machine at home is my TV because I enjoy watching my favourite channels during my free time. It helps me relax and feel happy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“spending machine”应为“sweeping machine”。建议使用正确的词汇，并通过连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Definitely, washing machines save me a lot of time, and sweeping machines help keep the house clean. Therefore, I really need them because they make my life more comfortable.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和结构，并明确表达观点。

例: No, I usually don't read the instructions because most machines are designed to be user-friendly, so I can use them easily the first time.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“All all”和“directly to use it”。建议避免重复，使用正确的表达方式，并提供更具体的理由。

例: I don't think it's very important to read the instructions because I prefer to try using the machine directly. Most machines have user-friendly guides that make it easy to operate.

× The the machine I like most.

✓ The machine I like most.

句子中出现了重复的定冠词“the”，应删除多余的一个。

× because on my spare time I don't like to watching my favorite channel on it.

✓ because in my spare time I like to watch my favorite channel on it.

“on my spare time”应改为“in my spare time”，表示在空闲时间；“don't like to watching”结构错误，应为“like to watch”。

× because on my spare time I don't like to watching my favorite channel on it.

✓ because in my spare time I like to watch my favorite channel on it.

动词“like”后接动词不定式“to watch”，而不是动名词“watching”。

× especially washing machine it really can save my time and also spending machine can keep the house clean.

✓ especially washing machines, they really can save my time and also sweeping machines can keep the house clean.

“washing machine”和“spending machine”应使用复数形式“washing machines”和“sweeping machines”；“spending machine”应为“sweeping machine”，词汇错误。

× especially washing machine it really can save my time and also spending machine can keep the house clean.

✓ especially washing machines, they really can save my time and also sweeping machines can keep the house clean.

“washing machine it”中“it”指代不明确，应改为复数代词“they”与复数名词一致。

× I really need them and they make me comfortable to spend my spare time.

✓ I really need them and they make me comfortable when I spend my spare time.

“make me comfortable to spend”结构不自然，应改为“make me comfortable when I spend”，表示在我花费空闲时间时感到舒适。

× No, definitely, to be honest, using the machine the first time you will strictly to use it, because the machine nowadays is usually be designed user friendly, so it's not important for me to read the instructions.

✓ No, definitely. To be honest, when using the machine for the first time, you should use it carefully because machines nowadays are usually designed to be user friendly, so it's not important for me to read the instructions.

“will strictly to use it”结构错误，应改为“should use it carefully”；“is usually be designed”时态和语态错误，应改为“are usually designed”；“user friendly”前应加“to be”。

× using the machine the first time you will strictly to use it

✓ when using the machine for the first time, you should use it carefully

“using the machine the first time”缺少介词“for”，应为“for the first time”；“will strictly to use it”结构错误，应改为“should use it carefully”。

× because the machine nowadays is usually be designed user friendly

✓ because machines nowadays are usually designed to be user friendly

“is usually be designed”语态错误，应为“are usually designed”；“user friendly”前应加“to be”；“machine”应为复数“machines”。

× The machine notice is so user friendly so it's not important for me.

✓ The machine's instructions are so user friendly that it's not important for me.

“machine notice”表达不准确，应为“machine's instructions”；“notice”应为复数“instructions”；句子缺少连接词“that”使句意完整。

× I'd like to directly to use it.

✓ I'd like to use it directly.

“directly”作为副词应放在动词“use”之后，且不需要介词“to”。

× All all, let me see.

✓ Well, let me see.

“All all”无意义，应改为常用口语填充词“Well”。