Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 중복되고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 중복된 표현을 피하고, 문법적으로 올바른 문장을 사용하세요.

例: My favorite machine at home is the toaster because it allows me to prepare breakfast quickly and easily, saving me a lot of time in the morning.

提案: 단어 선택과 문장 구조에 주의하세요. 'sleeping machine'은 'sweeping machine'으로 수정하고, 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Absolutely, washing machines and sweeping machines are important nowadays because they save a lot of time and effort, making daily chores more convenient and efficient.

提案: 답변이 미완성된 느낌이며, 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 명확한 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드세요.

例: Not really. I usually try to figure out how to use a machine by myself, but if I find it difficult, I read the instructions to understand it better.

提案: 'lead the instructions'는 잘못된 표현입니다. 'read the instructions'로 수정하고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하여 자연스럽게 표현하세요.

例: Absolutely, I think it is very important to read the instructions, especially when using new devices, because it helps us avoid mistakes and use them safely.

× Hmm my favorite machine in home is toaster because I usually make make toaster in the morning because it this is very easy and easy and fast to eat in the morning.

✓ Hmm, my favorite machine at home is the toaster because I usually make toast in the morning since it is very easy and fast to eat.

'Machine in home' should be 'machine at home' to use correct preposition (ID 11). 'Toaster' is the machine, but the student means the food 'toast' they make with it, so 'make toaster' is incorrect; it should be 'make toast' (ID 1). Also, 'it this is very easy and easy and fast' is redundant and ungrammatical; corrected to 'since it is very easy and fast to eat'. The sentence also needed articles like 'the toaster' (ID 22).

× So I love making a toaster so this machine can save my time.

✓ So I love using the toaster because this machine can save me time.

'Making a toaster' is incorrect because you don't make a toaster; you use it. The verb should be 'using' (ID 8). Also, 'save my time' is better expressed as 'save me time' (ID 13).

× Absolutely, washing machine and sleeping machine are important in modern time.

✓ Absolutely, washing machines and sweeping machines are important in modern times.

'Washing machine and sleeping machine' should be plural 'washing machines and sweeping machines' (ID 1). 'Sleeping machine' is a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machine'. Also, 'modern time' should be 'modern times' (ID 1).

× This is because these appearances save a lot of time and effort.

✓ This is because these appliances save a lot of time and effort.

'Appearances' is incorrect; the intended word is 'appliances' (ID 1).

× So overall we they made daily course more convenient, efficient.

✓ So overall, they have made daily chores more convenient and efficient.

The sentence has extra pronouns 'we they' and 'course' should be 'chores'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs correction (ID 26).

× Not really. I don't always read the instructors before using a machine because I try to figure it out by myself.

✓ Not really. I don't always read the instructions before using a machine because I try to figure it out by myself.

'Instructors' is incorrect; the correct word is 'instructions' (ID 12).

× However, if I feel challenged by using a machine.

✓ However, if I feel challenged when using a machine, I read the instructions.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or conclusion, making it a sentence fragment (ID 23). It needs completion to be grammatically correct.

× Absolutely, I think it is very important to lead the instructions especially when using a new devices because we are open unfamiliar with them.

✓ Absolutely, I think it is very important to read the instructions, especially when using new devices because we are often unfamiliar with them.

'Lead the instructions' is incorrect; it should be 'read the instructions' (ID 12). 'A new devices' is incorrect; 'devices' is plural and should not have 'a' (ID 1). 'Open unfamiliar' is incorrect; likely meant 'often unfamiliar' (ID 13).

× So to leading the instructor can help us to avoid mistakes.

✓ So reading the instructions can help us avoid mistakes.

'To leading the instructor' is incorrect; it should be 'reading the instructions' (ID 12). Also, 'instructor' should be 'instructions' (ID 12). The infinitive 'to leading' is ungrammatical (ID 8).