Machine— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，且句子结构有些重复。建议注意单词拼写和句子简洁性，避免重复表达。

例: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because Wuhan's summers are extremely hot. When I turn it on, I feel very cool and comfortable, which helps me relax during the heat.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“makes my make, makes our home tidy, tidy, really tidy”表达混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并避免重复。

例: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in our home. They help my mom keep the house clean and tidy, which allows her to relax more.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误，如“bridge”应为“bridge”可能是误说，且“read it instructions”应为“read the instructions”。建议注意词汇准确性和句子连贯性。

例: It depends. For common machines like washing machines or vacuum cleaners, I usually don't read the instructions because I am familiar with them. However, for new devices like a TV, I always read the instructions to learn how to use all the features.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“you maybe you don't nail know the machines correct ways and it may be to block it”难以理解。建议加强语法练习，使用简单明了的句子表达观点。

例: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important. Without them, you might not use the machine correctly, which could cause it to break or stop working.

× Well, I think that is air conditioner because, you know, in summer Wuhan's weather is really hot and I can't bear it.

✓ Well, I think that is the air conditioner because, you know, in summer Wuhan's weather is really hot and I can't bear it.

这里缺少定冠词“the”，因为“air conditioner”是特指家里的空调。英语中单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。

× So when I open the air condition, I can feel really cool.

✓ So when I turn on the air conditioner, I can feel really cool.

“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，且“open”不用于启动空调，正确表达是“turn on”。

× I think that is really comfortable.

✓ I think that is really comfortable.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。

× Yes, for sure. I think that is really important in our house because my mom always makes my make, makes our home tidy, tidy, really tidy.

✓ Yes, for sure. I think that is really important in our house because my mom always makes our home tidy, tidy, really tidy.

“makes my make”是错误表达，应为“makes our home”。“make”重复且无意义。

× So if she use the washing machines or sweeping machines, she can relax herself.

✓ So if she uses the washing machine or sweeping machine, she can relax herself.

主语是第三人称单数“she”，动词应加-s变为“uses”。“washing machines”应为单数“washing machine”，同理“sweeping machines”改为“sweeping machine”，因为通常指一台设备。

× Well it depends. If I use some normal machine just like bridge or sweeping machine and washing machine, I don't.

✓ Well it depends. If I use some normal machines just like a bridge or sweeping machine and washing machine, I don't.

“some normal machine”应为复数“some normal machines”，且“bridge”应加冠词“a bridge”。

× Well it depends. If I use some normal machine just like bridge or sweeping machine and washing machine, I don't.

✓ Well it depends. If I use some normal machines just like a bridge or sweeping machine and washing machine, I don't.

“just like”后面应加冠词“a”，表示举例。

× But if I use some new machines just like TV, I will read it instructions and I can find many ways.

✓ But if I use some new machines just like a TV, I will read its instructions and I can find many ways.

“TV”前应加冠词“a”，“it instructions”应为“its instructions”，指代电视的说明书。

× But if I use some new machines just like TV, I will read it instructions and I can find many ways.

✓ But if I use some new machines just like a TV, I will read its instructions and I can find many ways.

“it”用作物主代词时应为“its”，表示“它的”。

× Yes, of course it's really important because if you don't read any instructions you maybe you don't nail know the machines correct ways and it may be to block it.

✓ Yes, of course it's really important because if you don't read any instructions, maybe you don't really know the machine's correct ways and it may get blocked.

“you maybe you don't nail know”语序错误，应为“maybe you don't really know”。“machines correct ways”应为“machine's correct ways”，表示所有格。最后“it may be to block it”表达不正确，应为“it may get blocked”，表示机器可能被堵塞。